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Old 11-15-05, 05:55 PM   #1
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"Visions In My Head"...Some Venting Shit...

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Word...Some emotional shit. Sorda uplifting, but not at the same time.

I will edit with links...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2539945
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2539956
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Old 11-15-05, 07:37 PM   #2
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I like the beat


lyrics were very personal

flow was good


levels seemed good


good drop


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Old 11-15-05, 09:16 PM   #3
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Thanks man...

Uppin'....
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Old 11-15-05, 09:32 PM   #4
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That's my beat, Aesop!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm writing to that. = )

Your flow was best I ever heard... Seem like you was feeling this, and your delivery's pretty good and presence is nice here. Not bad at all...
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Old 11-15-05, 09:32 PM   #5
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listening: intro is weird, love the beat, flow is dope, wow nice strings damn, who made this beat seriously, quality is really dope seriously, now finish the verse for our collab arrgg lol
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Old 11-15-05, 10:22 PM   #6
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Good track B, boo at us not ever doing that colab LOL. Lyrics were good, flow was nice - obviously quality wasnt hot, but good drop regardless. Good stuff to think about, and you dropped on a real personal level. Good track.
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Old 11-17-05, 03:32 PM   #7
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Thanks all...

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Old 11-17-05, 07:55 PM   #8
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nice track man.. very deep.. good shit man.. need to work on that quality a bit.. but overall good stuff.... keep droppin
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Old 11-17-05, 11:47 PM   #9
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aight i'm peepin now...

Production:The production is pretty damn hot and origianl-8/10
Flow:ya flow is pretty good.....it rode well through the whole song-7.5/10
Pressense:Ya pressense is pretty good...it rode well the whole song-7.7/10
Emotion:Yeah it was pretty good....i felt what you were sayin it matched the lyrics-7.8/10
Lyrics-Lyrics were good for this track...i was really feelin it man...-8/10
Overall:yeah it was pretty sick somthin i would put on my ipod(if i had one)-7.9/10

keep this coming LE i am feeling ya style and what not i could imagine you gettin big in Canada
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God damn son, what the hells up with you and these extra oud tracks man. The last oen I heard was uber loud, and this shit's just fuckin giga loud. Damn, turn your headphones up man, shit.


But this track would have been a lot better if you took 40 steps back and pulled the plug on your way out the room.

Then go rob someone on the street and immediately steal a car and hauled ass to get a pop filter at gun point. If your flow was smoothed out you'd be an A+ emcee virtually overnight. Possibly someday monumental lyrics, since people really connect with your flaws. Now turn your god damn volume down.
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Old 11-18-05, 02:16 AM   #11
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God damn son, what the hells up with you and these extra oud tracks man. The last oen I heard was uber loud, and this shit's just fuckin giga loud. Damn, turn your headphones up man, shit.


But this track would have been a lot better if you took 40 steps back and pulled the plug on your way out the room.

Then go rob someone on the street and immediately steal a car and hauled ass to get a pop filter at gun point. If your flow was smoothed out you'd be an A+ emcee virtually overnight. Possibly someday monumental lyrics, since people really connect with your flaws. Now turn your god damn volume down.



Lmfao...

Word at the gunpoint shit...

I'm getting a condensor mic and everything I need in two weeks...can't wait.

I'm working on the flow...still trying to get it smoother, but I have problems with my breath control.

But thanks for the feed.
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Old 11-18-05, 02:29 AM   #12
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I'm working on the flow...still trying to get it smoother, but I have problems with my breath control.


No problem for the feed, but the breath control isn't hurting your flow, the flow's hurting the breath control.
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Old 11-18-05, 03:04 AM   #13
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No problem for the feed, but the breath control isn't hurting your flow, the flow's hurting the breath control.


Damn...I never thought of it like that before.

I noticed when I start recording, I run out of breath easy...is that due to my flow..?

Yes. Notice how you have a lot more time to breathe when you're spitting less sylables in a line? There's more free time in the same space that lyrical ba would take up, so boom, now your hands aren't tied and you can actualyl pull off the next bars.

There's been lots of tracks I had to file down the sylables in order to stay on flow and up till the most recent I was still doing it. Try it. You'll love it
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Old 11-20-05, 07:46 PM   #14
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alright typing as i listen your on some emotional shit lately lol emotion wise wow so much improvement its crazy hearing a track from a month ago and then listening to this damn props on that flow was actually probably the best i have heard from you no lie your elevating fast only complain on this is ur quality ur mic is bbbboooooooooty lol get a new one
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