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critique my new peice
IP: 352B 2918
I'm not the one to be polite
I'm the one to pick the fight got the hardest punch on this planet like a fistfull of hard granite who wants to come on an test this? mowin' down raw eggs for breakfast stronger than Steve Austin from Texas i'd Drop him with my own Stunner have him bleeding from the nostril Leave him lay'd up in the hospital and ten months in a rehab hostel Have Vince Mcmahon wanting to hire me have him bulk up the crowd admission fee People wanna cheer for me like they did for the great Ali when they see me they explode louder than bombs goin' off in bali |
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 0846 6CD0
Its a little plain and simple......
elevate in ya wordplay a little homie... each line you dropped is a little too short also, but you'll get better with practice, keep elevatin check out my drop in the freestyle section called 'I'm Just Rhymin....' Peace.
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