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Old 11-17-05, 02:27 PM   #1
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Old 11-17-05, 02:48 PM   #2
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beat is dope, I like the originally song.
the quality is decent,
your flow is choppy as hell
and the ending is like..WTF!? "will be missin you"
thats what that said? lmfao @ that.
its waay too short to.
elevate man, work on mainly your flow.
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Old 11-17-05, 03:12 PM   #3
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flow is mad off sone good beat you could prolly made it ten times better if you didnt sound like it was hard for you to think of that shit... but not to bad
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Old 11-17-05, 03:57 PM   #4
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sample/intro nice..... beat good.... flow sounds forced...not casual...allmost as if you can tell you just wrote this and your reading it for the first time...
lyrics are ok..nothing too special....
weird ending.
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Old 11-17-05, 04:30 PM   #5
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aiite..........'preciate feedback...................
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