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Black Dragon - Aim for the Head
IP: 00CA 3534
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214620
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214764 ----------------------------------- juss a freeverse on tha Swizz Beats "aim for the head" http://rideinconline.com/play.php?b...&mode=song_hifi or http://www.rideinconline.com/bands/466/ or www.soundclick.com/qckillahz pz ~1~ Last edited by Black Dragon : 11-17-05 at 02:33 PM. |
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IP: 99EC 75E4
beat is dope, I like the originally song.
the quality is decent, your flow is choppy as hell and the ending is like..WTF!? "will be missin you" thats what that said? lmfao @ that. its waay too short to. elevate man, work on mainly your flow.
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IP: 96F2 DF03
flow is mad off sone good beat you could prolly made it ten times better if you didnt sound like it was hard for you to think of that shit... but not to bad
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Light Weight
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IP: 5285 DC82
sample/intro nice..... beat good.... flow sounds forced...not casual...allmost as if you can tell you just wrote this and your reading it for the first time...
lyrics are ok..nothing too special.... weird ending.
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aiite..........'preciate feedback...................
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