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Old 12-12-05, 05:29 PM   #1
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47. Mystic Chaos vs. 48. Legend

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Old 12-12-05, 07:55 PM   #2
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damn what the fuck checkin
 
Old 12-13-05, 05:30 PM   #3
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you want to be champ,well try to stay straight.i know its hard being gay all da time
cause i dont want yo rhymes coming out "crooked",like sylvester stalones mouth line
 
Old 12-14-05, 07:47 PM   #4
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check check.....
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Old 12-14-05, 07:55 PM   #5
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Lay ya rhymes on the "STREET" cuz they cant stay up wit mines
Cuz you couldnt be "STRETCH" even wit your own whack lines


street=street volume 2
stretch=player in game.
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Old 12-14-05, 08:32 PM   #6
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Old 12-14-05, 11:11 PM   #7
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v/Legend

was just better, still bad though
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Old 12-15-05, 12:56 PM   #8
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Not a good battle...

Legend - your lines are both stretched, and there is no internal or multi syllabic rhyming to help out with the flow...too much detail, and didn't really like the punch either...

Mystic Chaos - Man what was that? Very weak, it didn't even make sense....not clever or hard hitting either...


Legend came stronger in the punch department, and so gets my vote...

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Old 12-15-05, 01:58 PM   #9
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you want to be champ,well try to stay straight.i know its hard being gay all da time
cause i dont want yo rhymes coming out "crooked",like sylvester stalones mouth line

WOW @ HOW STRETCHED THIS BAR IS...
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But,your punch was good.Nice similie.Just get rid of filler and shit.

Lay ya rhymes on the "STREET" cuz they cant stay up wit mines
Cuz you couldnt be "STRETCH" even wit your own whack lines

The fact that you had to explain it in order for people to understand it messed it up for you.You seem to have tried too hard to be complex.

v/Legend
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Old 12-15-05, 02:12 PM   #10
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Actually Mystic Chaos' was pretty clever. Stretch was a dope rapper, R.I.P.

Legend was mediocre

v./Mystic Chaos

vote on mine
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Old 12-15-05, 04:27 PM   #11
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uuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnn
 
Old 12-16-05, 09:52 PM   #12
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v/legend...damm u got lucky cuzz it took 4 eva 4 ya bar 2 flow...if he would of spit a decent punchline u would of lost
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Old 12-17-05, 06:04 AM   #13
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MC came weak.

V./ leg.
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Old 12-18-05, 09:43 PM   #14
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Legend wins.
Mystic Chaos loses.
 
Old 12-18-05, 09:43 PM   #15
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