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12-14-05, 11:38 PM | #1 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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Trip Droppin That Real Shit Once Again>>>peep It!!!!!
IP: C3CE 96D1
yea whaddup yall....this is a real song talking bout life....so peep it...give me good detailed feed....much appreciated....1
Song Title: I Got Dreams Link to song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=185998 Links to feed left: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2577091 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2577098 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217201
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is Last edited by Triple_N : 12-15-05 at 01:06 AM. |
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12-14-05, 11:54 PM | #2 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: D379 BF07
beat is cool drums are like non existan lol
flow is cool you switched it up alot alot of multis was pretty cool i liked it lyrics were real deep youre letting us get to know ur life was good i like the first verse the ebest the the outro speech was nice not the best ive heard from you but it was depep cool track
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12-15-05, 12:01 AM | #3 | ||||
L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listening...
Beat sounds deep...good shit... Flow is dope...lyrics are deep as hell...good shit. Quality is great as usual... Great stuff. Keep it up man, for sure. |
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12-15-05, 12:07 AM | #4 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 0D7D 534F
yo u really startin ta get inta these slow songs first close my eyes.now its this but werd this shit is defitnly dope..of course ur quality is dope...yo u speakin ta everyone on this shit..good job i dont even think the flow went off at all and u even switched it up a lil....i like the beat i'd probably spit to it...lol defitnly no complaints on this track...and fuck yea life IS a bitch...yo this has ta be the deepest track i seen from u and u did really good..i'd probably give this a 8.7/10....yo defitnly keep doin tracks like this
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12-15-05, 02:34 AM | #5 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 12E7 3621
aight peepin now
production:you always have a good ears for beats.....this beat was reall ill:9/10 Flow:aight.....ya flow was real nice you rode the beat real well on this track:8.5/10 Emotion:ya emotion was good but if you pushed ya self a lil more it sounds kinda monotone in ya voice in some spots but overall its pretty good:7.8/10 Pressense:You reall had nice pressense on this shit......i could feel you all the way through the track:8.5/10 Lyrics:You had some solid lyrics on this felt the realness and vocab:8/10 Overall:this is problay an other song i'd burn too a cd and listen too its pretty good...your quality is real nice.....keep droppin this stuff fam:8.7/10 Keep coming fam..this ish was nice rtf:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217203 |
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12-15-05, 04:30 AM | #6 | ||||
The Rulers Back
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
Aight son...
Flow is dope as usal kinda slow tempo for you though nice switch up Delivery in tha begining was different from you it was dope lovin it Lyrics something that i cant even knock cause you can tell when someone spillin ish from they heart or not i was def feelin tha issues you was touchin on... Overall-this was my joint son perfect track for me right now i be stressin an shit but damn prolly best track from you IMO you jus keep comin better an better every track son keep droppin =1=... |
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12-15-05, 08:22 AM | #7 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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IP: 8733 3D5C
damn trip pretty good, been awhile and shit, nice lil story and I liked the way you switched the flow up and shit. beat is pretty good, that lil screem in the background is dope. voice is nice and layed back on this one, good job man. I downloaded it
keep droppin dopeness.
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12-15-05, 01:22 PM | #8 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: FEA7 665B
aight
Beats Dope Dleiverys Fuckin Hot!!!!!! emotions Koo Your Lyrics Are Hot As Hell The Beat Sample Is Dope Damb Your Flow Is Flawless How long you been Doin This ??? The Qualitys Crisp..... Damb Seems You worked Hard On this Joint The Outros Dope Its A Nice Track Proly The best I Heard On Rv In A Time Overall:9.5/10 Keep It Up!
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12-15-05, 01:45 PM | #9 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 3053 F660
liking how u kinda switched the delivery for this....its fits VERY NICE with the beat and topic....
lyrics are...just....damn.....nice.... you = best flow on this site........your prolly one of the 2 or 3 on this site...than i can listen to....and not wonder off in the middle of it..... sample in the beat is nice...and i like how its the hook for this....and like what you do with the hook...as far as the talking over the sample....BUT i would have REALLY loved to have heard a hook done by you on this....i think that coulda really set it off.... really i have no complaints with this.......*downloads*
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12-15-05, 01:51 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 8002 63C0
whoaaa this is deep rite here trip
beat is dope flow and your delivery is dope, like the way you switching ya flow up lyrics are fire deep and revealing, got a real insight here trip dope dope track overall - 9/10 can ya return the fav dawg on this track- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217221 appreciated
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12-15-05, 04:06 PM | #11 | ||||
NO SURRENDER
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IP: AC2A 692A
Beats top, intros cool...top voice,
lyrics seem deep, heavy flow, effects on vocals am feelin...i like how you switch the flow up inter rhyming...delivery is perfect, confidence is there and it shows. deep lyrics. 2nd verse is best imo. Top track, 9/10.
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12-15-05, 10:13 PM | #12 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: DF10 FA26
Beats cool.. Pretty slow...
Vocals were good.. Flow all sounded tight.. Production was good.. Word @ the positive message this song is giving..... Ill shit bro... |
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12-16-05, 08:45 PM | #13 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 9D93 781D
aiiight peeping....
beat coo..... nice shit wit voice..... good flow, liking the story you telling... good shit about mcdonald's and jobs and shit..... Like how you talked on hook wit singing on background..... feeling that dope touch.... second verse, good shit....... good multi's and good flow changes. Dope shit man. Lyrics ill....... word hook singing is ill.... word @ always way to overcome the bullshit....... word yo.. true shit overall, real dope song man. That real shit there. Good variety you got going in your last few songs. feeling it yo. dope shit. 9.5/10 pc one.
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12-18-05, 04:34 PM | #14 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Uppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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12-18-05, 05:08 PM | #15 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: D808 EF89
Well,first time I'm listening to on your tracks..my feedback may be different from the rest,but w/e..take it how you want
Liked the beat and quality...But I hate your voice.It pisses me off...LoL. But the lyrics were good..nice rhyme scheme and shit.I ain't ussually a fan of postive message,but this was ite.. Only thing is the delivery..you sound like you spitting a battle rap.U just sound agressive..and yet,you telling people to hold their head high.. it's like a bully pressing a nerd up against the wall looking like their about to steal they lunch money...but then patting then on the head telling them to stay strong.. That's what your delivery seemed like to me.. Anyways,that's my feed.. |
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