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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

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talon has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-05 07:20 PM.

big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow
shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds
talon kills bitches, i dont care if you're strong, im stronger
get your rectangled with me....wont be a'round here much longer
this may just be a key, but my words open doors
he's still in the closet....locked away in his drawers
smack this fool with capitols, knocking him backwards, take a peek
just look at NM, his progression only leads him to an L, see?
i laugh at his gay name, and doesn't make sense, i might add
well, if notorious is as whack as his rep, then yeh, the dude is bad

fuck it, quick key, you ain't coming with anything better

NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-05 08:04 AM.

I'm like and eagle the was I rip your ass to shreds...
Brah, my name should be talon, ima make you bleed red...
While i'm takin' shots at ya head, you just sittin' there jerkin' off...
This battle was over before it started, I'm the one u see merkin' slobs...
Ima knock you out, the way lennox lewis did lil' mikey tyson...
My Lyrics are like a straight jacket, there ain't no point in fightin'...
Your raps are weak, no flow, Mine keep comin', there instantanious...
There ain't no denying it, your a lil' punk bitch, your raps are heinous...
Your Gettin' fucked like an anus, Homie that ain't the way you get layed...
You Like a Fucken Gameboy G, The way ur fucken ass get played...

Done

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NotoriousM vs. Clockwork

Voted For: NotoriousM

NotoriousM - iight spit, you had a good flow, and some strong punches.

Best Line - Ima knock you out, the way lennox lewis did lil' mikey tyson...
My Lyrics are like a straight jacket, there ain't no point in fightin'...

Worst Line - I'm like and eagle the was I rip your ass to shreds...
Brah, my name should be talon, ima make you bleed red...

Talon - Your rhymes didnt work, flow was ok, punches didnt make sence.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow
shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds

OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I am voting for NotoriousM becuase he had the stronger punches, and the better flow. Talon you flowed ok, but your punches didnt work.

Vote - NotoriousM

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wow, how did notorious get a vote?................

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bump this..............................................

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Voted For: talon

notorious had weak similies and metas.. some shit was just statements honestly

big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow
shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds
talon kills bitches, i dont care if you're strong, im stronger
get your rectangled with me....wont be a'round here much longer

talon didn't have many punches. but enough to get him the win.
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bump this..........................................

Voted For: talon

Talon won this one, it was a pretty good battle, but the boo'ze alcohol thing just won me over, good shit from both, but that's what made talons stand out.

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Voted For: talon

talon got this.......

i couldn't find any good punches in M's

Voted For: talon

big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow
shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds
Pretty cool
talon kills bitches, i dont care if you're strong, im stronger
get your rectangled with me....wont be a'round here much longer
Not bad concept, weak wording, ok line
this may just be a key, but my words open doors
he's still in the closet....locked away in his drawers
Nah
smack this fool with capitols, knocking him backwards, take a peek
just look at NM, his progression only leads him to an L, see?
Nah
i laugh at his gay name, and doesn't make sense, i might add
well, if notorious is as whack as his rep, then yeh, the dude is bad
Nah

I'm like and eagle the was I rip your ass to shreds...
Brah, my name should be talon, ima make you bleed red...
Nah, too simple
While i'm takin' shots at ya head, you just sittin' there jerkin' off...
This battle was over before it started, I'm the one u see merkin' slobs...
No
Ima knock you out, the way lennox lewis did lil' mikey tyson...
My Lyrics are like a straight jacket, there ain't no point in fightin'...
Poor concept
Your raps are weak, no flow, Mine keep comin', there instantanious...
There ain't no denying it, your a lil' punk bitch, your raps are heinous...
Nah
Your Gettin' fucked like an anus, Homie that ain't the way you get layed...
You Like a Fucken Gameboy G, The way ur fucken ass get played...
Really played concept

talon got this pretty easily, his opening two bars were decent.

v/ Talon

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