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Old 01-03-06, 03:00 AM   #1
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word........ my new mic setup isnt fully here so i cant record with is yet...... yup so i literally put my comp mic on my stand, pop filter infront, and did my best mixin attempt..... i have the whole track written, but i wanna hear people think about the quality and all that right now

now to explain the track.... i unno why i wrote to this beat and y i wrote THIS to this beat, but all i can say is that this is wat came out... i dont even think thats gonna be the title.... but wen this song is over, there are quite a few subplots, but one of the main plot is that the bad shit im doin is taken me from earth, to underground (yea, ambiguity intended) to underwater, to finally, the underworld...i keep gettin deeper and deeper and sinkin.... i really like this song lyrically i just hope itll all work together wen im totally done...

here ya go

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i left feed on Calams shit and than Spuls collab and some other shit in the past two days....
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Old 01-03-06, 06:04 AM   #2
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wtf lmao.. that mic sounded prettty fuckin good -_-.. ROFL.. eww at his computer mic sounding better than my studio mic -_-..

Solid flow..
lmao.. weird song but i liek it cause im weird .. but yea shits nice man.. if you made a song and somehow the chorus was dope.. it'd be a nice track.. quality was on point actually..:-/.. wtf you did i do not know
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Old 01-03-06, 11:05 AM   #3
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flows dope

beats koo

lyrics are dope,weird lol

qualitys koo

deliverys nice feelin it

hmm kinda short but its only a sample so meh

yeah i like it

Overall:8/10
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Old 01-03-06, 11:20 AM   #4
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decent..
i like the beat
ure flows cool
delivery is meh, need to work on it
presence also need to be worked on
quailtys cool
lyrics r cool

keep it up, keep droppin, keep elevatin

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Old 01-03-06, 11:22 AM   #5
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LMFAO @ this computer mic sounding like a good ass mic...

your flow on this is a lot better......

lyrics are coo...kinda weird n shit....

overall it was pretty good....kinda hard to leave feed on such a short sample....but this a definite improvement..
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Old 01-03-06, 12:14 PM   #6
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werd... thanx... the song will make alil more sense wen im all done... i hope, lmao
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go feed on my track lazy ass^
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Old 01-03-06, 12:48 PM   #8
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lol @ you having Ike's picture on your S/C...

Beat: sounds battle-ish...not bad dawg, I'd def. flow to it


Flow: pretty good...nothing major one way or the other


Delivery: not bad...didn't sound as if you were trying too hard


Lyrics: decent...


Rhyming: standard = not bad


Quality: pretty decent to good


Summary: short but acceptable


RTF please

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Old 01-03-06, 11:14 PM   #9
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word...... ^^^^ ur quality thing helped me out..... i followed that alil
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Old 01-04-06, 07:43 AM   #11
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Beat is nice. You sound a bit quiet when you come in. Quality is fuckin nice for a computer mic. lyrics are dope aswell. but you do need turnin up a bit, when you sort your new mic out. lmao, wasnt expecting that cut out. But yeh, dope shit. It'll sound much better with a better mixdown and better quality
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