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Check in by: 02-06-06 at 06:53 PM

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MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-06 06:38 PM.

Mexican has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-06 06:39 PM.

ok ok lyrical confucius, u are lyrically confused/
quickie, o snap i didnt kno u meant that with a dude/
this bitch drinks gray goose but fux gray geese/
unlike philosopher i aint always on my knees/
this guy,so poor,he cant pay 4 a 2 $ hoe with a 2 month lease/
he done tied up his bud and now got his moma on a leash/

hm good luk.

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Mexican u a wanna be citizen at Ellis island dawg u got negated
So go home cause u the main reason Americas over populated
What u doin all aboard I think u got on the wrong boat
Illegal alien no wonder your sigs a federal reserve note
Im trying to advise u for a win it’s the whole hundred parental(per-rental)
that’s why I shit on u like I ate your food so keep your background confidential

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Authentik Intelligence

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

mc ur lines were more better, flowed nicer and btter rymes

mex u gonna get better cus ur lines were weak

no hate rtf

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im sorry but you gon have to come up with a better vote than that.

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uppin this vote drop links i repay favors honestly

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Authentik Intelligence

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

Vote - MC philosopher

K, the personals phil used were cheap racist ones, but atleast they hit hard...Phil's second bar was his best one...Now, here's my breakdown...

Flow-Both cats had some structure problems, like tryin' to squeeze too many words and syllables into one bar. Mexican had better control of this than phil, so he took flow.

Punches-Fairly weak punches from both, played punches as well. Don't ever use the word "lyrically", cuz it's just lame. Phil's personals were his punches, so they hit a lot harder than Mexican's played "ya mom" lines and "down on your knees" lines, so Phil took personals.

Personals- Some alright personals from Phil, a little racist and overly-obvious...whatever....Mexican's personals were non-existent, except for commentin' on Phil's sig...lame...Phil took personals

Multis-Pretty much non-existent from both drops...Phil had some almost multis...I can't give Multis to either cat, cuz they were lame, or not there at all.

Wordplay-NONE...

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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s

Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s

yea i knowmy shit was wack it was quick and fun to me

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Authentik Intelligence

uppin for votes drop a good vote and leave the link

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Authentik Intelligence

uppin come on people drop a link ill hit u back wit an honest vote

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Authentik Intelligence

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

hmmm this was harsh and borderline just flat out racist... but still good personals... it was and added touch to use his sig agaisnt him in that way as well... Good shit

Opener: MC's 1st bar was the best... Mexican gay jokes are exetremely played out
Closer: MC (another good personal punch)
Punches: MC
Personals: MC
Creativity: MC
Complexity: None to speak of
Vocab: MC

Vote: MC

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Voted For: MC:Philosopher

MC:Philosopher:
Mexican u a wanna be citizen at Ellis island dawg u got negated
So go home cause u the main reason Americas over populated
2/10 - Stupid.
What u doin all aboard I think u got on the wrong boat
Illegal alien no wonder your sigs a federal reserve note
3/10 - BOO!
Im trying to advise u for a win it’s the whole hundred parental(per-rental)
that’s why I shit on u like I ate your food so keep your background confidential
4/10 - OK closer.
=9/30

You had a pretty weak verse, you rhymed ok, the flow was decent but you lacked hard hitten punches, and you used no wordplay.


Mexican:
ok ok lyrical confucius, u are lyrically confused/
quickie, o snap i didnt kno u meant that with a dude/
1/10 - Lame.
this bitch drinks gray goose but fux gray geese/
unlike philosopher i aint always on my knees/
1/10 - Lame.
this guy,so poor,he cant pay 4 a 2 $ hoe with a 2 month lease/
he done tied up his bud and now got his moma on a leash/
1/10 - Horrible.
=3/20

You had a whack verse, your punches where gay as hell, you used stupid rhymes.


OVERALL: This battle goes to MC for atleast tryin' to throw a punch. He used some ok wordplay and his punches were ok. Mex you need to work on everything dude. Your flow was decent but the rest was horrible.

Vote - MC

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