this piece is dope, read it....by OSB and Drakel

Uncontrollable chaos is brewing upon the darkened sky,
A burst of hope? Only Kirk is close when the stars collide,
Though to most, doe and clothes is the real thing to master,
Me and Drake are oh so broke still overseeing the pasture,
A symphony unclouding the veils that faking made,
Washing away the fables and lies like a breaking wave,
Angels crucified... Whos alive to do the stride of greatness,
Chew the lies of stupid guys and move aside the fakeness,
Prove inside the pages is a symphony of noise,
Here to rebuild everything that publicity destroyed,
Fly to God... Although they say that the skies the limit,
I'm already flying in it so its time to defy the odds.

heavens on edge, skies venge, clouds vomit
descending through the darkness streak two crowned comets
cause amidst all the choas, we kiss death on the lips
and stare eyes fixed on the oncoming eclipse

a light in the mist, missed by the overwhelming anger
we fail to see peace only assists compelling more danger
swelling fists persist, demand my growing need to advance
theres no telling what dwells in these hands if i took the chance
i stand still, feeling chills escape down my spine
its too to late to change, my fate already found its time
i was designed and created, made for only one purpose
berate straight into chaos, and see what emerges
there's no denying the urges, i've been trying for ages
but when i defy destiny, thats whats scribed into pages
im faceless without a cause; a makeshift with more flaws
but when the stack is un-even, thats how i beat the odds
its because i only applaud, to go along with the crowd
i know when its my turn, the noise will be twice as loud
in the midst of chaos, is where we become stable
the tale of Drakel and OSB defines, yet exceeds a fable
we are able in every way, poetry bleeds from our veins
the world as our canvas, pens lead the campaign
our methods arcane, leaving most competitors stubborn
we never concede a challenge, but why fight each other?
i dont trust violence, but it hides in us all
inside every mind, there's a malign silence entralled
like a calm before the storm, your mindset switches
and the guidance you once had, now uncontrollably vicious
but most are blinded to confide...it may be earnest
an unstoppable fury, can be optimally harnessed
see, every storm has an eye, guides and controls its course
but you dont know where it'll form, until you're taken by force

Drakel and OSB: we are The Storm....take cover while you still can.
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Well thats cool. Leave feedback, you bitches.

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Fuck you cunt sore. Ima read it after dinner and leave your queer feedback. This better be a good read or ima be pissed!

Be back in like 30min.

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Blow It - Topical

nice drop..................

structure was perfect..................................

it flowed nicly for a text piece...............................

imagry was fucking dopeness best ive seen inna long ass time in text.................

lyrics were obviously sikkness too

u guyz werk illy together this is tha first text piece ive read since i started audio and its illy,,,,,,....................wish yall did audio

rtf on one of my new trax in tha song forum
please and thank you
illy drop
10/10 pure genius

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yeah, i'll get to it after i eat, if i don't, just pm with or something, word

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Where the links hoe.!

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i think i leave feed on every OM in here, so, yeah

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Dat murfukka hot, I like how both of yall went punch for punch in yo verse.
tha drop is great...(Drop meaning Structure).
I would like to c more collobs like this one.
Yall keep ya minds open an ur heart focused, an I'm sure yall both will make it somewhere.

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LINKS TO MY SONGS:
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Fuk Tha Rules

wtf................

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LMAO @ the unknown dude......wtf kinda feed was that lol


structure was good of course...

i REALLY liked OSB's part.....both were dope...but i was really liking the multies, and inners to go along with em...shit was too dope....wish u could put that over a beat....

you 2 work really well together.......first time ive read text on this site in a long long time....and apparently its not too shabby...really i dunno what else to say...i enjoyed reading it....good job to both

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thanks... anyway... um.. feedback?

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shit dat was hot...yall really do work well togetha...and tha best part about it is dat i had a beat in my head and not one bar was off beat...dis is a fuckin sick piece...rtf in my shit...easy

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Word up homie this shyt was fiyah i was really feeling this you had nice emotions and good feeling in your peice.. your structure was on point ..and so was your whole concept was very creative.. Nice job.

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good shit, nice vocab... very consistant flow... thoght it slipped in spots a lil bit towards but not at the end... around the Crowd, loud, part... but than you picked it right back up... really felt the lyrics in this... nice way to convey your thoughts... hott drop... keep doing ya thing both of you...

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