One take track. Drop links and Ill return the feed


http://www.soundclick.com/2kn


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2704477
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225397

Listenin...sample at tha beginin is nice..feelin dat...i hate youre quality..lol...but youre flow is decent...from da UK right?...i like u beter than other UK other heads..lyrics are nice..u need to up ure breath control alot..u run out of alot..quality sucks so its hard to hear...but flow is decent..

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why does everyone use this beat..... from wat ive hear...... calamity, indeph, and now u....... and whos got money that Apexx tries to lock the thread

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Ill peep it later but u got good shit bro.

He from down under bro....not the UK!!!

This beat gets used once every few months man lol...

Aiight, straight up... Ya style needs work bruz... What you might wanna try doin (somethin I gotta try doing more myself too) is adding more melody to ya delivery..

Instead of jus doin straight up lyrics, you gotta switch ya flow more often.. Cause at the moment its at too much of a constant and it can sound droney and robotic... Thats to do with your vocals aswell, you dont really sound comfortable on the mic.. I seen mad shitloads of dudes have that same problem, its jus to do with experience and how long you been workin on getting your vocals to the point where they resonate with the track well music wise...

I've had some of the same problems your having I can tell.. And to an extent I still am, just on a smaller scale cause I been workin real heavily on my shit latly..

Keep at it mate..... Peace.

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Dudes from new zealand..

Close, but no cigar bro....

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lol i knew it was either or :\

yeh thanks nos and other who actually left feed!!

nice lyrics, flow is strate, work on ya delivery, and ya need to up da quality but otha than that....overall strate track man.......

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qualitys allways a fucking problem with me, i have a fucking condesner and pre amp,but still fucked quality, anyone know how to fix this then get at me.

what kinda condensor you got?

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Thats the pre amp




Specifications

Element : Pressure Gradient Transducer
Polar Pattern : Uni-directional
Frequency Response : 20Hz-20KHz
Sensitivity : -36dB±2dB(0dB=1V/Pa at 1KHz)
Output Impedance : 200Ohm±30%(at 1KHz)
Load Impedance : >=1000Ohm
Self Noise : 15dB A (IEC 581-5)
Max Input SPL : 130dB(at 1KHz=<1% T.H.D)
S/N Ratio : 79dB
Low Frequency Attenuation : 100Hz/oct 12dB
Phantom Power Requirement : DC 48V Phantom

i have the same pre amp..but ive never seen that mic before in my life..but it sounds like u have too much lo's..maybe u just dont kno what to do when mixin to add clarity?

but try eqin ya vocal in CEP if thats what u use..go to filters> Parametric Eq> Mackie lo cut

see if that helps man..

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