word, I just decided to remix it i guess... shit was written and recorded today. So iunno if it's my best. but I needed to get back on recording tip. so peep game, and lemme know what you think.

Intro: Usher/Lil Jon
First verse: SPuL
Hook: Usher/Lil' Jon
Second verse: Usher
Third verse: Ludacris
Outro: SPuL
Beat: "Yeah" by Usher ft. Ludacris and Lil' Jon

www.soundclick.com/spul

Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225279
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225502

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did u really link us to just www.soundclick.com

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^wow.... thanks for the catch man. lmao...

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lol

im like a tampon... ladies want me once a month period???

LMAO

damn...

aight aight....

lol

this is kida dope.... i hate to say it... lol... but its aight... hope they dont try suin you again...

mixed well homie... way to collab wit the mainstream

8.5/10


RTF

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^lmao it's women want me UP THERE once a month period.

but appreciate feed and I RTF

uppp

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sorry about the wait had to get some shit taken care of.....

wow....a remix......lyrics are good...could have been a lil bit better...but the flow makes up for it....how'd you get the hook with the track?? did you download it like that?? overall a really good track i'd give it a 7.5/10....nice job

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oh man, a remixto a song I hate. everybody prolly knows by now that I hizzate synthed beats like this my bad lol. but this should be interesting.

Spul, DAMN man you sound EXACTLY like carson as far as your annunciation and flow goes, just with 481 less vocal effects. Your flow and timing are on and you obviously link up with the song with the "when I told her" part. You should lower your recording vol a little to raise your speaking vol since this track (and you as a whole) would have benefitted from more energy.

I'd liek to see you break out of your comfort zone mayne cuz you're starting to type-cast your self.

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theyre both from MA i believe, so it shouldnt be that much of a surprise

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Bruh, I'm from NJ where a few members of this board audio section are form and none of us sound jack shit alike lmao. mass can't be THAT small lmao

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lol yea, true. But maybe that's reason why annunciation is same iunno. Flow shouldn't be affected. But I'll work on that. And by out my comfort zones what you mean by that? like type of tracks I do? or the beats?

But thanks for feed fux, I got you, but right now i'm off to watch wrestlemania. lol

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^yea, just some quick shit, but i'll def work on that. thanks to both for feed.....

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lmfao @ doin the remix to such an old ass song...... but aight its all cool

hah, some aight lyrics, but i unno if u wanna be a tampon...... was that u on "wanna threesome" ????

Ohhh man, this hook is killer, man who sang this???? they should have a record deal or sumtin.......

just waitin for ur nxt verse..... so far shit has been solid, but i really dont like this song anymore so its kind of annoying..... maybe its just me.... hook again

ur verse is comin.......ohhh no, its Luda..... so far he outshined u..... lmao, i think u bit that bridge, no hate..... lmao

this shit was ok, but i was thinkin that u shoulda prolly done a second verse on this..... cuz its kinda weird just recordin like 40 seconds or so on this entire song

cool shit, RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224618

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Spul....long time no see. You on of tha only niggas i remember from way back when, when i was on this bitch like every day. By tha way nice trak.

ur verse is good, flow is on and lyrics are good for this kinda track, but i feel that u lacked energy, like apexx said, lower the volume and up ur vocal volume when spittin, not bad though man, keep it up.