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04-12-06, 11:38 AM
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Jae Stackz - Im Baaack
IP: 762C C3B2
This an intro joint...recorded it at 1am in the mornin..what yall think?..
www.soundclick.com/jaestackz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226294 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226292
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04-12-06, 12:03 PM
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IP: 64CA 6C26
What's hot:
beat is good, but needs to be amped a tad Your flow was on track to being good, but your delivery lacked some...like you didn't hold the syllables you needed to hold to really be ON POINT...not bad though What's not: work on breath control and delivery when you do a flow like that...makes it iller Overall: good soundin track though...I liked your intensity on it 1 |
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04-12-06, 01:31 PM
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IP: 5B4D 9309
Thanks fam..........
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04-12-06, 01:48 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 73BB A234
Beats Dope.......
Intros Nioce Yeah Yeah Yeah WOOAh WOOAH! Lol Flows nice,feelin it that punchline thng you showed me huh?Word up you know what i thought bout the lyrics...good shit Deliverys nice,feeling it,seem more AMPED now,lol@straight/queer eye line haha Lol@Hilfigers line Emotions koo feeling it,got a hype vibe! Presence is imrpoved Cadnece seems fine,you could mask the breath loss part by double ups over it Good shit,im downloadin! Overall: 9/10
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04-12-06, 02:10 PM
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IP: 5B4D 9309
Thanks..............
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04-12-06, 07:12 PM
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Champion
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IP: 8BDE F073
upppin...........
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