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04-08-06, 09:23 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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Black Dragon - H dot H
IP: 46E3 3347
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226055
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225406 --------------------------------------- Waddup, try and figure out who H dot H is...............i kinda tell you at da end of tha track.......'preciate any feedback.....on tha violin beat by Alchemist.... www.myspace.com/blackdragonsic ^^ the song should automatically play............ pz ~1~
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04-09-06, 08:05 PM
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IP: 64CA 6C26
ha...1st to post
What's hot: Good story... flow wasn't bad What's not: Beat isn't bad, but it sounds like so many beats I've heard before...ehh Work on incoporating an ill flow with a good story, ala Biggie Smalls...et. al, Overall: decent...lacked focus and polish 1 |
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04-09-06, 10:31 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 46E3 3347
'preciate da feed Q..............
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04-10-06, 12:07 AM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 2977 80E3
Beats not bad.
BLACK DRAG YOU NEED TO EQ YOUR SHIT!! bring that quality up man, it makes it easier to feel your lyrics as well as hear em. The story follows along nicely. Your delivery is right on time but your need to vary it so it dosen't become repetetive. This should have been two verses with three hooks on em to be a "song" too soudns liek about 20-24 bars that'd be a comfortable size for two verses. people forget short songs fast unless it's intense. Peace.
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04-10-06, 02:44 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 46E3 3347
'preciate da feedback Apexx, yea man imma make it a lil longer...........but thanx for ya input....
pz ~1~
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04-10-06, 02:47 PM
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~Cursed With Illness~
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IP: 9A5C 1BE7
Who'd you say made that beat, cuz i swear i've heard it somewhere before i just can't put my finger on it.
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04-10-06, 03:04 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 46E3 3347
dawg no one eva said i made that beat, it's by Alchemist
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04-10-06, 03:11 PM
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~Cursed With Illness~
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IP: 9A5C 1BE7
^^^ I didn't say you said that YOU made it, i asked who you said made it. Chill out.
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04-10-06, 03:14 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 46E3 3347
lol, i'm chillen fam, haha yea i kinda read it wrong mah bad homie...............
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04-10-06, 03:21 PM
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~Cursed With Illness~
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IP: 9A5C 1BE7
^^^ All good, what you record wit?
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04-10-06, 07:51 PM
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IP: 46E3 3347
My mic is a AKG Perception 200, the USB interface i use is Lexicon Omega, and a mic cord and Cool Edit Pro 2.0 and that's bout it...........i see in your sig it says Phase One is that ur new name........cuz i'm from NC too man Charlotte........
pz ~1~
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04-16-06, 07:13 PM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
decent beat.....not great delevery but emotions ok....flows not bad..kinda choppy tho...yea..way choppy...lyrics is nutin great..not that bad tho...
not a bad drop RTF on soma my shit if ya get a sec
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04-17-06, 02:24 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 46E3 3347
'preciate da feedback........i got ya Cho.............
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