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05-20-06, 03:23 AM | #1 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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where the worlds at
IP: 8E7F 1337
having dreams of guys wit big guns and shotgun slugs attackin me
and pretty soon i'll have more airtime than big pun's lung capacity committing every crime under the sun so bitch just pass the weed i almost quit rap but i aint gon be done so just stop asking me i might be expelled from my education but ima still help the nation i'ma sell my help to our generation fightin the depths of hell towards satan hell already took over planet earth the devil had it ever since birth bodies fillin caskets during this verse who knows which bastard'll go first so i do whatever i can ta fix it..be better if my raps can stay explicit so the moral can truly glisten...i just need the words for people ta listen i'll finish this and post the links later im tired as hell and goin ta bed pc |
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05-22-06, 02:07 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: F154 0779
its a pretty good verse man, i liked the subject u spoke about
good flow my favourite line was: "...pretty soon i'll have more airtime than big pun's lung capacity" get some more multis in there i give it 6.5/10 check out my verse wen u got time: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228591 B eZ |
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05-22-06, 02:09 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 7984 B4A8
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DECENT SHIT, NICE WORDPLAY...EVERYBODY KEEP DROPPIN LIL HALF ASSED SHORT VERSES DOE, THIS WASNT EVEN A 16. AT LEAST 6 MORE BARS ADDED TO IT WOULD MAKE IT BETTER, BUT FOR DA MOST PART EVERY LINE WAS NICE, GOOD SHIT.
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05-25-06, 09:37 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: EF7B 93C8
Closed read the rules
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05-26-06, 01:35 AM | #5 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 8E7F 1337
oh shit i forgot the links
GOD DAMN IT...where's my weed |
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