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Old 05-28-06, 01:05 PM   #1
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37. Makeveli Trained (0-0) vs. 38. Precize (0-0)

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Old 05-28-06, 01:16 PM   #2
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What a mismatch, jk...actually not really

12 lines?
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Old 05-28-06, 10:10 PM   #3
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Old 05-29-06, 01:38 PM   #4
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kids roasting fast..stab your boasting ass with broken glass
your verses seein more Flip then pistons coaching staff..
yea a mismatch, once I post up this newbies gon split..
maks comin with wackness
thats so out of this world, sci fi asked to write a movie on it..
i cant stand newbies n your nothin more then a fan/groupie..
burn you behind doors...
so they cant See u Bacon like the first Hollow man movie..
sick of his mouth, bring out the pliers and clamp on his lips..
he couldnt hear the sound of victory in a beat boxing championship..
gotta bone to pick with me?? everyones showin up to see me snap it..
how you gonna call your self Mak Trained, when u need more practice..
he'll prolly fake his death jus so he wont get his trash scarred..
leave him with so many Holes, i could come all Filler in my last bar..

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Old 05-31-06, 07:52 PM   #5
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1 filler n a mak trained punch?! nigga are you serious???

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im not exactly sure that name is framiliar i think he is from RB if not then he is a decent txt battle from here... not great but decient

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Wasn't Precize in the champ match two weeks ago or something ?

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Ok.....
Look what the weak sent, some wack lines for the event
Bitch, not only are you predicted against, but at best only decent
So stop pretendin, if you ever got anywhere it was a lucky catch
Your such a fluke....we forgot u were even in the champ match
Get outta here w/ that RnR style, ya text reminds me of the basics
Ten percent quotables….the rest are just filler n some played shit
The difference is, I keyed this plus I keep my punches personal, jew
Btw, my fist wanted you to know it was nice meeting you
Fuckin fag n he knows ima mack, leavin my pants sagged
Takin the belt? Yea, I know this homo wanna see wuts in my pants
Shit, go head n take a glance, I could care less, whore
I’m confident in my sexuality….your just Cocky in yours
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Old 05-31-06, 08:26 PM   #6
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votes???? please? lol
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Old 05-31-06, 09:45 PM   #7
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Pre

gotta bone to pick with me?? everyones showin up to see me snap it..
how you gonna call your self Mak Trained, when u need more practice..
he'll prolly fake his death jus so he wont get his trash scarred..
leave him with so many Holes, i could come all Filler in my last bar..

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Look what the weak sent, some wack lines for the event
Bitch, not only are you predicted against, but at best only decent
So stop pretendin, if you ever got anywhere it was a lucky catch
Your such a fluke....we forgot u were even in the champ match


Ths was a close match IMO... both had some decent lines nothing too great and nothing that bad either... both could use a little work on the wording and the punches but other then that both came decent.. as you can see the quotables are tied at 2 each so i'd have to go with whos verse i liked better and that would have to be

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Old 06-01-06, 12:41 PM   #8
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gotta bone to pick with me?? everyones showin up to see me snap it..
how you gonna call your self Mak Trained, when u need more practice..
he'll prolly fake his death jus so he wont get his trash scarred..
leave him with so many Holes, i could come all Filler in my last bar..

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Look what the weak sent, some wack lines for the event
Bitch, not only are you predicted against, but at best only decent
So stop pretendin, if you ever got anywhere it was a lucky catch
Your such a fluke....we forgot u were even in the champ match

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Old 06-01-06, 03:37 PM   #9
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bump......

fuckin 15 characters shit
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Old 06-01-06, 03:43 PM   #10
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So stop pretendin, if you ever got anywhere it was a lucky catch
Your such a fluke....we forgot u were even in the champ match

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he'll prolly fake his death jus so he wont get his trash scarred..
leave him with so many Holes, i could come all Filler in my last bar..

liked tha rest of Precize's bars more tho, came more consistent... alotta Mak's other bars just didnt do much for me... like tha belt one, you dont have tha belt right now, so it felt indirect and weak.... much respect to both emcees...

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Old 06-01-06, 03:43 PM   #11
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Look what the weak sent, some wack lines for the event
Bitch, not only are you predicted against, but at best only decent
So stop pretendin, if you ever got anywhere it was a lucky catch
Your such a fluke....we forgot u were even in the champ match

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he'll prolly fake his death jus so he wont get his trash scarred..
leave him with so many Holes, i could come all Filler in my last bar..


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Old 06-01-06, 11:06 PM   #12
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kids roasting fast..stab your boasting ass with broken glass
your verses seein more Flip then pistons coaching staff..
gotta bone to pick with me?? everyones showin up to see me snap it..
how you gonna call your self Mak Trained, when u need more practice..
he'll prolly fake his death jus so he wont get his trash scarred..
leave him with so many Holes, i could come all Filler in my last bar..

vs.

So stop pretendin, if you ever got anywhere it was a lucky catch
Your such a fluke....we forgot u were even in the champ match
Get outta here w/ that RnR style, ya text reminds me of the basics
Ten percent quotables….the rest are just filler n some played shit

Close battle, but I got Precize takin this with more consistency...Both could have come harder thought but still at least ya'll both showed...

Vote - Precize
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Old 06-02-06, 10:36 AM   #13
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precize was definately played with the Mak nameplays, and the rest of his shit wasnt too great. mak started alright with the personals, but started to fall off near the end. still, i didnt really like one of Pre's punches. iv either seen them before or they just sucked. Mak had the personals which was enough to take it

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Old 06-02-06, 01:04 PM   #14
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Old 06-02-06, 04:57 PM   #15
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Pretty decent battle here. Precize had about 4 lines that were pretty nice, an overall consistant verse. MT dropped a decent verse. The champ match personal and the closer were the only lines that I thought hit hard in the verse tho. I'm goin with Precize on this one...a more consistant verse.

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