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Word... good luck

Ill have it up in like 20.

Led'll fuck you up, and relieve ya pain with my fist pressure
..Ya owe 2 me ya life...and Im not talking ya tourny failure record
I plan on a KO, ...after this battle we'll know he aint hot
Cuz a fuckin crutch is the only thing that'll give him props
Fuck it ya done son, you've just hit an all time low man
So I'll slamdunk this bitch...and put em back in FreeThrow Land
ya nothin special like homeless kids on christmas wit ya lack of gifts
addin fire to your insults cause thats the only way this bitch haz a diss
i'm transforming nutrition i'll make this bitch choke
like hes outta quarters this tooth fairy's whole style is broke
Deaths bout to expose this kid like sex in public
u tha king? well ur empire just crumbled like the check republic
ima destroy ya whole rep, so like restartin races i'll send you back at start
punch hits so hard that Int's whole face gonna be disfigured like you was abstract art
When I punch it's like givin condiments how I throw in salts
And you know damn well I've knocked out this baby's teeth like grown adults

Blah 16 match it

Always filler, No real punches from your bars ive seen
Well my shit comes with a tombstone you gettin R.I.P'ed
You're just a recycled rapper ....... A repetitive speaker
That shoves meat down ya throat like a competitive eater
You're ass spittin, So stop dropping those trash writtens
Or ill soak this bitch quick, Have him blessed like baptisms
Go head, Shiver & Quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know, Even your pet agree like Triple H
And you aint touchin thrones, So dont even gawk at mine
Cuz im the man ya whore'a scope, And i aint talkin signs
I guess im wrestlin with ya scripts, The way i slam ya writin
So how many times now have you been banned for bitin ?
Plus I'll slap you in your chest, Just to clap your organ
Then put one foot on ya chest like im Captain Morgan
Led poetic or Faceless, Just stop posting up this trash
Couple days youll be banned again, This'll be over in a flash

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Nice one on getting this up super quick. Ima stick it for you.

Open for voting.

I plan on a KO, ...after this battle we'll know he aint hot
Cuz a fuckin crutch is the only thing that'll give him props
When I punch it's like givin condiments how I throw in salts
And you know damn well I've knocked out this baby's teeth like grown adults

vs.

You're just a recycled rapper ....... A repetitive speaker
That shoves meat down ya throat like a competitive eater
And you aint touchin thrones, So dont even gawk at mine
Cuz im the man ya whore'a scope, And i aint talkin signs
I guess im wrestlin with ya scripts, The way i slam ya writin
So how many times now have you been banned for bitin ?
Plus I'll slap you in your chest, Just to clap your organ
Then put one foot on ya chest like im Captain Morgan

Flow came on at the end with a few funny lines. Flash, you came really stretched and with some bad wording. It seemed like you just wanted to post and get it done. If you woulda worded your concepts better you couldve ahd a good verse.

V/ Flow

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ima destroy ya whole rep, so like restartin races i'll send you back at start
punch hits so hard that Int's whole face gonna be disfigured like you was abstract art
^that shit was aiight.. but stretched like the fuck. could'a used better wordin as well.

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And you aint touchin thrones, So dont even gawk at mine
Cuz im the man ya whore'a scope, And i aint talkin signs
^^this was a dope concept and could have been better with better wording. work on wording shit so u can execute it more properly.
Plus I'll slap you in your chest, Just to clap your organ
Then put one foot on ya chest like im Captain Morgan
Led poetic or Faceless, Just stop posting up this trash
Couple days youll be banned again, This'll be over in a flash
^this was aiight, i just quoted cause it had more wit than ya other barz.

both were aiight. i feel that flow just had some better ideas than flash. both have shotty wordin they need to work on and both could work on coming more fresh and ALOT less play'd.. nawmeanz? word.

v/ Flow Intell

Led'll fuck you up, and relieve ya pain with my fist pressure
..Ya owe 2 me ya life...and Im not talking ya tourny failure record
-decent opener, the personal tip makes it gutta
I plan on a KO, ...after this battle we'll know he aint hot
Cuz a fuckin crutch is the only thing that'll give him props
-nice, i like that
Fuck it ya done son, you've just hit an all time low man
So I'll slamdunk this bitch...and put em back in FreeThrow Land
-it's ok
ya nothin special like homeless kids on christmas wit ya lack of gifts
addin fire to your insults cause thats the only way this bitch haz a diss
-ehhhhh
i'm transforming nutrition i'll make this bitch choke
like hes outta quarters this tooth fairy's whole style is broke
-no
Deaths bout to expose this kid like sex in public
u tha king? well ur empire just crumbled like the check republic
-spelt wrong and sucks
ima destroy ya whole rep, so like restartin races i'll send you back at start
punch hits so hard that Int's whole face gonna be disfigured like you was abstract art
-lol that's decent
When I punch it's like givin condiments how I throw in salts
And you know damn well I've knocked out this baby's teeth like grown adults
-worded funny

Always filler, No real punches from your bars ive seen
Well my shit comes with a tombstone you gettin R.I.P'ed
-weak opener
You're just a recycled rapper ....... A repetitive speaker
That shoves meat down ya throat like a competitive eater
-LMAO. dope.
You're ass spittin, So stop dropping those trash writtens
Or ill soak this bitch quick, Have him blessed like baptisms
-heh
Go head, Shiver & Quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know, Even your pet agree like Triple H
- lol nice wordplay
And you aint touchin thrones, So dont even gawk at mine
Cuz im the man ya whore'a scope, And i aint talkin signs
-its ok
I guess im wrestlin with ya scripts, The way i slam ya writin
So how many times now have you been banned for bitin ?
-personal?
Plus I'll slap you in your chest, Just to clap your organ
Then put one foot on ya chest like im Captain Morgan
-word. nice. the flow was fucked by the double chest
Led poetic or Faceless, Just stop posting up this trash
Couple days youll be banned again, This'll be over in a flash
-nameplay


V/ Flow Intell easily, he came pretty dope.

yea i fucked up on the chest line but i couldnt edit it cuz he already dropped

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Word nice job on dropping early flow...

And Word @ kempo sticky'n this.. Ill be dropping the first 30 minutes in each of my battles... as to im not on to often and have alot of shit going on right now

Upping this to the top.

I plan on a KO, ...after this battle we'll know he aint hot
Cuz a fuckin crutch is the only thing that'll give him props <<<< NICE

addin fire to your insults cause thats the only way this bitch haz a diss <<< FORCED

i wasn't feeling your verse man, tthe lines above are the best and worse part of it though.. idk, some of your punches came off as too plane and didnt hit hard at all.

Vs.

Go head, Shiver & Quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know, Even your pet agree like Triple H <<< NIce Wordplay with the pedagree
I guess im wrestlin with ya scripts, The way i slam ya writin
So how many times now have you been banned for bitin ? << hard personal
Led poetic or Faceless, Just stop posting up this trash
Couple days youll be banned again, This'll be over in a flash << Cool Nameplay

v/ Flow, easy vote. harder verse, with harder punches and more consistent ones also.

I plan on a KO, ...after this battle we'll know he aint hot
Cuz a fuckin crutch is the only thing that'll give him props
When I punch it's like givin condiments how I throw in salts
And you know damn well I've knocked out this baby's teeth like grown adults

vs.

You're just a recycled rapper ....... A repetitive speaker
That shoves meat down ya throat like a competitive eater
Go head, Shiver & Quake, Im the type to break a nigga face
Your dawgs know, Even your pet agree like Triple H
And you aint touchin thrones, So dont even gawk at mine
Cuz im the man ya whore'a scope, And i aint talkin signs
I guess im wrestlin with ya scripts, The way i slam ya writin
So how many times now have you been banned for bitin ?
Plus I'll slap you in your chest, Just to clap your organ
Then put one foot on ya chest like im Captain Morgan

This was a one sided battle...pretty easy....Flash you came with 1 good bar even though ive seen it around a lot...other than that you had nothing appealing to me....Flow Intell. you had some hard dope shit which easily guided u 2 a win.....

v/flow intell.

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