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09-19-06, 07:12 PM
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Don't Let Us ft. Fluent Flo (will rtf!!!)
IP: 2372 BC06
www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
or www.soundclick.com/paranoid05 Verse1: Fluent Flo Verse2: Paranoid feed links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3080466 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3080459
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09-19-06, 07:32 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: F6DF 1FE3
Lets see.....
Fluent Flo- seem a little new.....the draggin of ur words were a little annoyin. again this aint my kinda track so i might just be a hater. Paranoid- I like your verse alot better than Flo's. better presence and better lyrics as well. u are more comfortable on the mic. but like I told u on aim. Love aint my thing so........take it however u want it.....i rather rip sum ones throat out than talk about sum one special in my life.  |
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09-19-06, 07:55 PM
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scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
fluent fell of a few times and dragged his werds out......didnt like his verse much....
yourz was much better better flow...lyrics....presence....just overall a better verse..... keep dropin and tha shit will imporve sorry for ta shity feed ill get chu next track just wasnt feelin this one
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09-20-06, 08:14 PM
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IP: 73B8 65CC
ight im listening beat is kinda fruity if ya ask me ....but its decent first verse sounds like there was a lot of clips cuz i can sum shit distorted lyrics was coo para you sound a lil monotone but ya lyrics made up fo it needs mo presence on the mic overall this was decent decent drop keep doin you
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09-22-06, 11:36 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 94AA 2DDB
listening....
beat's cool, I like it. Fluent sounds really new to this, like it's his first or second time on the mic. Flow wasn't too fluent  . Paranoid sounds a little better on this than I'm used to hearing him on. Flow was nice, but delivery could have been better. A little too monotone for my taste, but definitely one of the better tracks I've heard him on.....
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