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Old 08-07-06, 01:55 AM   #1
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Old 08-07-06, 02:05 AM   #2
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alright let me drop feedback on this real quick.

Where the fuck did i hear this beat before? i've heard it a few times actually. But anyways let me get into this track

The introduction is cool. basically pumped up your track. Used your chorus. Shits fire Good way to start a track. I was feelin this Introduction.

Production

The production part was pretty good. the adlibs were decent. actually good. Not off track or anything. they came in nice. the quality is pretty good. I can nod my head to it. what do you record with? your volume is alright maybe a little bit too loud. but maybe its just my headphones. The beat is cool. I heard it a few times. But i like it actually. It fit your delivery and the topic you were on. So overall production was nice on your part.

8.8/10

Vocals

Hmm. Your vocals. were nice. Nice flow i was likin the speed rapping style then switchin up and slowin down again. i like that kinda shit. The lyrics were on point. nothing i havent heard before. but it's nice bruh. Keep it up. Your Flow is nice on this joint it fits the beat and your delivery is nice aswell. It fits the track. You were on beat throughout the whole thing i don't think you fell off. Nice shit. the vocals were pretty good. i liked this. The chorus was decent. i liked it. sort of catchy

overall 8.4/10

overall nice track bruh. I can bump this a few times. nothing that'll make me like OHH DAMN let me bump this shit in my whip. but this is a nice little underground track. I like it. Nice shit

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Old 08-07-06, 02:11 AM   #3
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k good track...good production, good flow ect...you can be good

but to be honest.....this was boring....the hook just made me want to turn it off after the 3rd one....you verses had little direction...beat is very much so repetative....

not a song id listen to again...once was hard....not that its bad. just boring and it got annoying quick.....
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Old 08-07-06, 12:37 PM   #4
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yo spul killer. lol

peepin''

shit love this hook. shit is ill. nice multi's..


verse 1: shit's tight..... love the multi's. flow is ill. got a tight voice. overall dope

hook again, shit's dope. onlything i'd say is, you should of put some effects on it to make it stand out from verse.

Verse 2: same tight shit. love your delivery. burn your mouth string of multi's was ill

hook again nice shit

overall this was a tight lil jam yo man. liked how you eneded it with just accapella. dope track yo. 9/10

stay up. we should collab sometime if you'd be down ~_~

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Old 10-17-06, 10:40 PM   #5
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u on triple threat ...thas a label from tdot....my boy littles is on it......its prolly not tha same but yall gon have beef i see it coming
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Old 10-19-06, 08:02 AM   #6
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beat is cool!

...hook has got nice flows and multis...


verses : i loved your flow,fast and slow,your delivery was str8,ur vocals were a lil too loud,presence was iight cud have done better..but other than that ima just say..FUCK u tight!..i dont think i've eva heard ya shit b4...damn! keep it up!
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Old 10-20-06, 07:41 AM   #7
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