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11-09-06, 12:41 PM | #1 | |||||||
New to RV
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"Grammys in the Ghetto"
IP: CEE5 2733
A small something from my "Opportunity Knocks" album thats almost completed....MADWEST!
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4535936&q=hi -------------------------------------------------- left feedback on http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236874 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236906 Last edited by Stovilla : 11-09-06 at 12:44 PM. |
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11-11-06, 01:20 PM | #2 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 5D86 EFAF
u certainly got the ability to flow....dont like the beat really.....content is ok....a lil generic....
sound a lil like a robot with the echo followin...... this track overall was ok honestly...nothin that put me at wow.....just acknowledgin that u can ride a beat good and ur flow was coo *nods* |
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11-11-06, 05:23 PM | #3 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
quality sounds like mine = crappy...u need a new mic bro...like me!
flow is monotonous voice is monotone delivery is repetitive lyrics dimished by compromised delivery = lackluster beat is bland wasn't feelin this too much I think u have potential tho 1 |
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11-11-06, 11:11 PM | #4 | ||||
LowerTown's Finest
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IP: B3C7 B717
Quality on this track could've been better thus giving you alot more emotion for the listeners to hear
Flow - meh... not my style but it fit the beat well Chorus was alright but sounded the same as the verses your lyrics should've been planned out better, i mean with the style of flow you chose to use, you could've added a bit more to them to make them stand out more.. this track wasnt WOW, but like Q said.. you have potential - keep working on ways to bring out your quality more if thats all you have to work with.
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11-16-06, 01:48 AM | #5 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: A0D0 9290
Word....gonna rework this in the studio....thanx for all the feedback...much appreciated.
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