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11-13-06, 05:51 AM
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new song "a million" please give feedback
IP: 6AEE 1450
can i get some feedback on this song....its calld "a million" im on the second verse and at the end
can u tell me who was the tightest lyrics /flow on this track me or the other cat (d-tox) and also wat do u think of the track as a whole here is the link...http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4660703&q=hi link works now! sorry feedback i gave : http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106396 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106397 Last edited by im_tfly : 11-14-06 at 06:36 AM. |
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11-13-06, 02:33 PM
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#2
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why so serious!!??
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IP: 2020 96DE
link dont work.....
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11-14-06, 06:37 AM
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IP: 6AEE 1450
sorry dudes the link works now http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4660703&q=hi
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11-14-06, 06:06 PM
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#4
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IP: 6AEE 1450
uhhhhhh no feedback?
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11-14-06, 06:43 PM
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#5
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
you kinda remind me of a young un polished too short
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11-14-06, 07:09 PM
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#6
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 58C7 AA2D
um..i never really liked this beat but its iight!
i'm feeling the first dude's flow and rhyme scheme! you got a better and comfortable presence/emotion on this..you got a steady flow..i'm liking it..ok this is some ok i get the concept!...idk whatelse to say..it was cool lol @ list of girls and outro!
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11-14-06, 10:53 PM
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#7
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New to RV
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IP: 6AEE 1450
yeah thanks for the comments so far.....keep them cuming....thanks in advance
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11-15-06, 11:22 PM
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#8
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Whys That?
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IP: 1BF0 D10A
Playing...
got a mad old school feel to it. Quality isnt too good bro.. flows on point though..lyrics arent good. very generic and simple ( personally I prefer tech rhymes) Damn, cant beleive how oldschool this feels bro. lol. Up your quality and this will be alot better. Hook could do with more essence and energy. Second verse the same.. overal its ok. |
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11-17-06, 05:29 AM
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#9
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New to RV
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IP: 6AEE 1450
yeah i kno bout da quality...im working from sum other dudes studio so i working on figuring out the best way to record down there and im seeing how were going ta acouticly treat da booth...thanks fo the advice....and the reason the rhymes r simple is cuz of the target on this one it was spose to be a song to get love from as much ppl as possible cuz its a "buzz generator" trust i got more suprises....rhymewise
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11-20-06, 12:07 PM
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#10
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New to RV
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IP: 6AEE 1450
keep the comments coming...bump
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11-20-06, 05:41 PM
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#11
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Fuck Parents
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IP: 8E1B CA14
shit ain't bad. quality's not as bad as some may think, flow on point n lyrics simple. bla
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11-20-06, 05:43 PM
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#12
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Fuck Parents
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IP: 8E1B CA14
Lmao @ the outro
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11-21-06, 03:43 PM
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#13
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New to RV
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IP: 6AEE 1450
thanks for all da comments so far keep them coming ( i love it wen ure thread gos bump bump bump)
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11-23-06, 04:20 PM
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#14
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New to RV
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IP: 6AEE 1450
bump..................................
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