eh, thinkin 12ish

Word 12 sounds good

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238276
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238261
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238267
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238264

Sure its not Apocalypto?

You can end your name wit tha letters [o,k] or [k,o]- cause both are provin true
Cause the first set describes your skills…& the second how I’m doing you.
App couldn’t serve me if he was a waiter- he’s a hilarious guy
He gets alotta hot-tips, tho…cause Apple fuck n e American Pie!
I ain’t putting pressure on Kemp, but it seems he’s got crushes…
Cause ‘Ap to win’ was a low-blow when I’M the one who made Top Punches.
& don’t call me a Lazy-boy, I’m the reason that your girl got loose…
Cause I had that bitch bouncin on more couches than Tom Cruise!
Peeps ask me if you’ll finish this race witta peso slow
I don’t know..
But, I DO know the level of threat from Ap-poco!
Only the fags hang out in the low ranks. I stay high cause I got str8 lines…
So when you get down there & share your losses…you’ll be making out jus fine.

12, holmes

Sorry I forgot to drop last night man, I got too stoned and I'm high as fuck now but I'll do my best man lmao

Yeah you got whored by Fletcher, he made your pain exquisite
So you're just like Christmas presents...
...And always get dropped whenever Nick pays a visit
I'll end your text career kid cause you just need to stop, serious
Cause I'm awash with genius and you just need awash, period
Your records terrible kid, and it's not your only flaw shit...
I'd call you the whipping boy of the league... but it's obvious you're all bitch
You're wack as fuck man, you're punches are lame and a joke
& Your lines are so easy to snort at they could serve as a replacement for coke
Your girls a beast man, a fat bitch is all she equals
Cause we've both got Jaws... but she's got 3 sequels
This faggot's a bum, & it's been made so that his secrets are known
Cause the last kid to lift the lid on Native found him asleep in his home

I'll end your text career kid cause you just need to stop, serious
Cause I'm awash with genius and you just need awash, period
Your girls a beast man, a fat bitch is all she equals
Cause we've both got Jaws... but she's got 3 sequels

VS.

App couldn’t serve me if he was a waiter- he’s a hilarious guy
He gets alotta hot-tips, tho…cause Apple fuck n e American Pie!


Yeah, I wasn't really feeling this battle that much. Both of you had a fair amount of either played concepts or poorly worded punches. Native's opener was a nice concept but the wording was all fucked up. And the ranking line he finished with was pretty played out. Then, on the same hand Appo didn't come remotely close to as good as he can. The coke line in his verse was a pure example of him not really putting a big effort in because that is fucking mad played. And the whipping boy/all bitch bar was a new flip on a pretty played concept also. Still though, Appo's verse was better and he had two quotables to Native's one quotabel.

V/ - Appocolyptik

Yeah I can't even remember writing this to be honest, I was stoned to fuck.

native pryde

App couldn’t serve me if he was a waiter- he’s a hilarious guy
He gets alotta hot-tips, tho…cause Apple fuck n e American Pie!

& don’t call me a Lazy-boy, I’m the reason that your girl got loose…
Cause I had that bitch bouncin on more couches than Tom Cruise!



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app

Yeah you got whored by Fletcher, he made your pain exquisite
So you're just like Christmas presents...
...And always get dropped whenever Nick pays a visit

You're wack as fuck man, you're punches are lame and a joke
& Your lines are so easy to snort at they could serve as a replacement for coke

This faggot's a bum, & it's been made so that his secrets are known
Cause the last kid to lift the lid on Native found him asleep in his home


good battle

i liked both verses...native came pretty good..juss had alot of nameplays...app and appoco i didn't feel...appo came pretty funny and had some hott personals..and that took it in my eyes

vote-Appocolyptik

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Thanks for voting Glocks, I'll return fair votes in all people who voted on this for sure.

Good battle Native, I wasn't actually gonna show but I ended up keying up a quick verse after blazing up 2 hefty joints of some chronic shit

You can end your name wit tha letters [o,k] or [k,o]- cause both are provin true
Cause the first set describes your skills…& the second how I’m doing you.
& don’t call me a Lazy-boy, I’m the reason that your girl got loose…
Cause I had that bitch bouncin on more couches than Tom Cruise!

vs.


Yeah you got whored by Fletcher, he made your pain exquisite
So you're just like Christmas presents...
...And always get dropped whenever Nick pays a visit
I'll end your text career kid cause you just need to stop, serious
Cause I'm awash with genius and you just need awash, period
Your records terrible kid, and it's not your only flaw shit...
I'd call you the whipping boy of the league... but it's obvious you're all bitch
Your girls a beast man, a fat bitch is all she equals
Cause we've both got Jaws... but she's got 3 sequels


vote- apoc. easy. he dropped some tight shit. i thought native wasnt bad, he had a couple quoteables, some ehh wording though. but anyways Ap dropped some tight shit, i liked the st. nick idea, the awash line and the whipping boy. jaws line was jokes.

nice verse

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Thanks for voting everyone, it's much appreciated and I've returned votes in all the battles of people who voted.

DTH I also edited links into my check in so you don't need to DQ me anymore