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12-10-06, 11:57 AM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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LBL Contendership Match: 3. Nick Fletcher (6-0) vs 4. John Hensley (7-1)
IP: 85D6 9262
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12-10-06, 12:04 PM | #2 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
check dude, 20 lines..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238332 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238266 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238264 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238272 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238268 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238275 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238277 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238267 Last edited by Nick Fletcher. : 12-15-06 at 07:26 PM. |
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12-10-06, 05:15 PM | #3 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 2029 97B3
sounds good to me
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12-11-06, 06:52 AM | #4 | ||||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
Word, just drop when you get on.
. . I'll have you mauled here son, and voters'll be so glad 'Coz we'll see H bomb so hard, Hiroshima won't feel so bad When I face the champ next week your name'll be known, so have no fear I'll hit whoever it is with a Nip/Tuck, like I'm promoting ya acting career I asked about this kid, after I stomped his house 'n' smashed him through Doctors told me John's status was stable.. .. and his was almost ready to move back in to It's 3 vs. 4 right here.. and I've made my final decision.. .. to drop next to nothing - so that my verse describes my ranking position Quote:
Your name 'n' bars speak wackness.. but, I'll still flip your concepts jew 'Coz the imposters of my imposters imposters told me ure imposters could whore you to The topic is battling Hensley, and the people expressin' they thoughts.. .. say that fucking with John is a bumpy ride, as a result of genital warts I'm eager to brawl, I brought weapons 'n' all.. but pistols won't be bared 'Coz if I pulled out Glocks.. history shows that John'll run scared We know you hardly vote, but this week u need tons of links you gay Even the ladies are reminding you.. .. but they're talking about the deodorant spray Even John's girl gives him no action, instead she comes to me, but.. .. the friction between us is immense - when I'm dry humpin' the slut I said you was weak, but after this you'll give me thankings.. .. for boosting you to a perfect ten - in the fucking rankings. Word. Oh, and if you don't get anything then DO NOT VOTE!! |
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12-11-06, 07:16 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 2029 97B3
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I see right through that. n' it's not because i listen alot. We know ya really mean.. ... '' i'm depressed, and your mag's the only one that's ever given me props'' And if i mention our last battle how could you NOT be scared. Don't bring up it makin HOF. we both know it's my verse that fuckin got u there. Ya name is pure irony. considerin' it's christmas time now. As far as the ranks go.. .. this Nick doesn't need cookies, milk OR a chimney to slide down. ^^With ya sex shit, the pedephiles got the same plan but its gettin hectic. You sneak into a house, offer kids somethin from your sack.. n' then get arrested. Ya lines are like Britney's sex pics since her career has slowed. Everyone's hyped to see.. .. but once ya do you realize they'd only be good if it was 5 years ago. Clint Eastwood movies even prove that you're gettin too lucky. Cuz im the good, ur the bad.. n' it's a tie between u and ya bitch for the ugly. You can thank bad eyesight for ya girl cuz it all equates. Hindsights 20/20.. aka the vision she WISHED she had when she 1st saw ur face. I wonder if life and death are similiar, i'm hopin they're not. But with ur poor ass 1 thing'll stay the same.. u'll be spendin' both ina box. Next week i'm scopin for Glocks to see who can write better. If you plan on goin face to face witha gun, be sure to include a suicide letter. Quote:
So here i am, same guy who'll leave ya ass rattled. The same guy who lost his skill.. .. same guy who's boring.. n' the same guy who shut u the fuck out in our last battle.
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12-11-06, 12:11 PM | #6 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 349D 3BAA
I'll have you mauled here son, and voters'll be so glad
'Coz we'll see H bomb so hard, Hiroshima won't feel so bad Even John's girl gives him no action, instead she comes to me, but.. .. the friction between us is immense - when I'm dry humpin' the slut I said you was weak, but after this you'll give me thankings.. .. for boosting you to a perfect ten - in the fucking rankings. vs I see right through that. n' it's not because i listen alot. We know ya really mean.. ... '' i'm depressed, and your mag's the only one that's ever given me props'' And if i mention our last battle how could you NOT be scared. Don't bring up it makin HOF. we both know it's my verse that fuckin got u there. Ya name is pure irony. considerin' it's christmas time now. As far as the ranks go.. .. this Nick doesn't need cookies, milk OR a chimney to slide down. ^^With ya sex shit, the pedephiles got the same plan but its gettin hectic. You sneak into a house, offer kids somethin from your sack.. n' then get arrested. Clint Eastwood movies even prove that you're gettin too lucky. Cuz im the good, ur the bad.. n' it's a tie between u and ya bitch for the ugly. You can thank bad eyesight for ya girl cuz it all equates. Hindsights 20/20.. aka the vision she WISHED she had when she 1st saw ur face. So here i am, same guy who'll leave ya ass rattled. The same guy who lost his skill.. .. same guy who's boring.. n' the same guy who shut u the fuck out in our last battle. This was actually really one sided, which disapointed me. I know Nick's dope but he really rushed his verse in this battle, either that or he had writers block. His wording - which is usually on point and makes weak concepts into solid punches - was unusually sloppy. For instance, the links punch has been done before a few times but he could have made it decent, but his wording let him down quite badly. In fact Nick is also renowned for coming with fresher concepts, but this time he didn't seem to be able to formulate many fresh ones. The stable, next to nothing and linx punches were all examples of this. In other words, I've seen Nick drop much better than this and this verse didn't really reflect what he's capable of. On the contrary, John Hensely dropped one of the best verses I've seen from him on this site. His concepts were worded very well and he combined wit with a hard hitting aggresive format which differs from his usual style, and upped the effectiveness of his punches. The slide down the rankings line was dope as fuck and made me laugh. In fact everything except the box and the britney spears punches (which I didn't really like) was fucking solid. In the end he took this battle comfortably, which suprised me as the last time the two battled it was extremely close. V/ John Hensley |
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12-11-06, 12:16 PM | #7 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
Last time was extremely close, huh.. last time he beat me 8-0.
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12-11-06, 12:18 PM | #8 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 349D 3BAA
Maybe it wasn't close in the votes but the battle itself was fairly close in the end he only won by a single quotable, and you both had a lot of quotables each so that should consitute as a very close battle.
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12-11-06, 12:57 PM | #9 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: F7E3 42B8
I'm not in till next week but I thought I drop a vote - dunno if it is taken into account. Here is some OK stuff:
NF I'll have you mauled here son, and voters'll be so glad 'Coz we'll see H bomb so hard, Hiroshima won't feel so bad I asked about this kid, after I stomped his house 'n' smashed him through Doctors told me John's status was stable.. .. and his was almost ready to move back in to VS. JH You can thank bad eyesight for ya girl cuz it all equates. Hindsights 20/20.. aka the vision she WISHED she had when she 1st saw ur face. Some stuff from Fletcher was not really played but been flipped ALOT better in the past. The "next to nothing" line for example. Vote - Nick Fletcher |
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12-11-06, 02:32 PM | #10 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
1-1.. yes..
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12-11-06, 07:45 PM | #11 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 7B42 8577
I'll have you mauled here son, and voters'll be so glad
'Coz we'll see H bomb so hard, Hiroshima won't feel so bad GOOD, I COULDA SWORE I SEEN SOMEONE USE THIS ON HIM BUT MAYBE NOT When I face the champ next week your name'll be known, so have no fear I'll hit whoever it is with a Nip/Tuck, like I'm promoting ya acting career GOOD PERSONAL CAUSE OF THE TV SHOW GUY HAVING THAT ALSO, SOME PEOPLE MIGHT NOT GET THAT BUT I DO It's 3 vs. 4 right here.. and I've made my final decision.. .. to drop next to nothing - so that my verse describes my ranking position LOL The topic is battling Hensley, and the people expressin' they thoughts.. .. say that fucking with John is a bumpy ride, as a result of genital warts YOU SET THAT ONE UP WELL, GOOD SHOT vs a name is pure irony. considerin' it's christmas time now. As far as the ranks go.. .. this Nick doesn't need cookies, milk OR a chimney to slide down LMAO ^^With ya sex shit, the pedephiles got the same plan but its gettin hectic. You sneak into a house, offer kids somethin from your sack.. n' then get arrested. WHOA, A HAYMAKER Clint Eastwood movies even prove that you're gettin too lucky. Cuz im the good, ur the bad.. n' it's a tie between u and ya bitch for the ugly LOL You can thank bad eyesight for ya girl cuz it all equates. Hindsights 20/20.. aka the vision she WISHED she had when she 1st saw ur face. OUCH! I wonder if life and death are similiar, i'm hopin they're not. But with ur poor ass 1 thing'll stay the same.. u'll be spendin' both ina box. DAMN, BEST BARS OF THE WHOLE BATTLE So here i am, same guy who'll leave ya ass rattled. The same guy who lost his skill.. .. same guy who's boring.. n' the same guy who shut u the fuck out in our last battle GOOD AS FAR AS THE PERSONAL TIP IS CONCERNED v/ Johnathan Nick you had a good verse and it was a decent try, (incuding a similar personal I threw at him about losing to Glocks)probably woulda beat some others but he had that box line and the rest of the insults. He heated up basically cause I didn't think the stuff John started with was all that good but Nick cooled off after opening better than John. after John put some lines together he just kinda had more consistant hit's in a row and that won it for him to me.
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Last edited by TEF : 12-11-06 at 07:48 PM. |
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12-11-06, 09:54 PM | #12 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: CCBE 9926
I would drop a bar by bar explaination But Yall Verses was very long and im already too board rii now .......So
Nick Overall ya verse was nice ....decent delivery on punchezI like the nameplay for sure it made ya verse more personal ......and to me it seem like you was caring a little bit more then JH was so thats why my vote went to you in this battle John You Had a nice verse too but to me it seemed like you were a little leanient towards direct punchez but overall your punchez were very nice but not so directed towards nick but directed like this is to any ole person .... Vote : Nick Definetely Should Get The Battle Of The Week
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12-12-06, 07:48 AM | #13 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
2-2.. closer than our last match up..
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12-12-06, 01:18 PM | #14 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 701A 7608
I thought Hens got this pretty decisivly. Overall he just hit harder and came with a lot better concepts and execution. I though Fletcher could have put a bit more htought into his wording because I liked concepts like the H Bomb and genital warts but they just didn't have much impact. Hensley on the other hand had some really clever shit such as xmas time, pedo, 20/20 and the closer. Overall, John just hit hell of a lot harder and I was digging his shit a lot more.
Vote: John Hensley |
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12-14-06, 08:52 AM | #15 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
I'm just going to say it here, because a couple of people have asked me about the Nip/Tuck bar....
John Hensley is the name of the actor who plays Matt McNamara on the TV show Nip/Tuck.... for those of you who did not know. |
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