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04-15-07, 10:52 PM
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I don't lose
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real hip hop
IP: 3011 7E9C
some quick shit i did on my feelings on rap/industry/music in general....
some real shit from the head....just shittin around.....some good quick shit... real hip hop - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5240894 links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3159538 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241458
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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04-15-07, 11:01 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 48E8 2135
yo man feelin this.....ya flow wuz kinda hard to follow in the very beginnin.....but otha than that really feelin what ya have to say in this song....mad different from the usual music u put out....this track is pretty dope.....well Jay keep droppen...
pz ~1~
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04-15-07, 11:34 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 8D1D 0114
i thought you were in jail lol. anyway beats pretty coo nice vibe. your flow is pretty coo and the vocals sound clear, nice volume level on this. the lyrics are pretty real, for once you doin somin different. you kinda have a voice similar to Jin's lol, so might you be an asian? lol jk anyway the hook is straight forward of course but not a bad tracks dude, probably the best I've heard you.
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04-16-07, 12:45 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: 3011 7E9C
j summers is in jail....not me....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-16-07, 11:56 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 47F3 E0A2
beat is bangin
I was noddin my head at the start of this track flow was tyte...reminded me of Tito Hook is nice...But, you def. should have spit over it...After the sample said what it said, you could have said something like, "Pound for pound, I got the best sound around"...or w/e...You get my point... very nice delivery This is the best I've ever heard from you. 8.5/10 And, I'm pretty hard to please.  |
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04-16-07, 12:09 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: D22F CD29
decent message. but still the concept is played. i like the chorus and u got good flow so this is commercial enough and gets a decent message out that a audience would actually wanna hear. so decent track
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04-16-07, 09:38 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 3011 7E9C
word thanks...drop tracks n ill start returning some feed
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-17-07, 07:20 AM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 2E2A ED07
yo rtf if ya want....http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241547
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04-17-07, 02:51 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: C056 53C3
this is dope
im going to download this word |
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04-17-07, 03:05 PM
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Herb
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IP: 8B56 FF63
Feeling the track, Flow is on point. The hook is dope love it. Multi's are great, i could bump this for sure. Great job. 8.5 outta 10.
idk y just that scratch of "Need something to rely on" loved that |
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04-17-07, 04:21 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 9E7F 937F
word, beats dope, n u riding this shit very nicely guy....liking the energy n vibe u setting, rhyme scheme n multis r tight guy, nice catchy stuff...good delivery...
quality on da track is dope, tight track guy, def. keep it up guy... |
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04-18-07, 06:16 PM
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Addicted
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IP: 6ABD 581C
this beat is ight but it seems too soft.........ur voice sounds like em but a lower pitch.....dont get me wrong ur lyrics is coo but im not feelin ur voice......you also kinda sound like tito..........overall this was ight
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