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Old 01-04-08, 03:40 PM   #1
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"Unlucky"...COMPLETE...L.E and 286...Fire.

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=6133972

Check that shit out fools.

I'll return the favour.

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Old 01-04-08, 03:44 PM   #2
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Both u and 286 are suckas man!

Talkin bout collabin...

shut my ass out


it's like that...


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Old 01-04-08, 04:10 PM   #3
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haha Q song time asap....that was an open collab tho, put something together like that for me ill be on a song in a week....but what chu think of the song tho?
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Old 01-04-08, 04:23 PM   #4
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Fine then.

L.E, Q, and 286 collab.
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Old 01-04-08, 06:19 PM   #5
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its a cool track

limited tryin to act hard kinda makes me giggle just never see u as hard lol
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concidering that i've got compliments from girls off of rv from that pic makes me wonder where your pictures are.....

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Oh and lk I got a serious question 2 ask u baby from me 2u. Will u marry me and be my wife, and the mother of my kids and all?

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Old 01-04-08, 06:46 PM   #6
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its to bad kids wont simply use the songs forum ....this shits retarded!
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Old 01-04-08, 07:11 PM   #7
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You know what...

That's a good point.

Fuck it I'll open it in the songs forums.

Close this.
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Old 01-04-08, 07:21 PM   #8
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see there u go bein soft again
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concidering that i've got compliments from girls off of rv from that pic makes me wonder where your pictures are.....

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Oh and lk I got a serious question 2 ask u baby from me 2u. Will u marry me and be my wife, and the mother of my kids and all?

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Old 01-04-08, 11:15 PM   #9
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LE...ur presence on track is bit ...and, your flow could use a bit of work...


It's solid...but, it's too predictable...



is this 286?...sounds angry...flow fits the tone of the track...


beat is good...a lil slow for my tastes...but w/e


Hook is decent...a tad lackluster...but, it's aiight


decent track





lots of "faggots" being tossed around...NO PUN



last verse...is that jay? w/e...all consistent
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Old 01-05-08, 04:09 AM   #10
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What... The fuck.

Okay, the hook's kinda lame...

LE your all over the beat... you need to do a better job at staying on the beat man!

286 is okay, but I'm not sure what the hell your attempting to do half of it.

Meh, I can listen to it a second time, but it's not your best work Chad.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 01-05-08, 11:15 AM   #11
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Really?

O_O.
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Old 01-05-08, 04:51 PM   #12
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damn vp be sippin on some HATERAIDE! nigga burn!
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