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topical ( witnessing a drive by)
IP: 23A8 883C
I saw it all with my own two eyes,
I saw the bullets punch as they slied. People ducking and covering for their lives. But all I do is watch in fear as they all die, Smoke and blood is heard in the night. But all I know is that this is nothing but a fight, Not between me or society, but between me and those who I hate, So as I grasp my mm's and get ready to hook my bate. I can not take anything more then a simple defeat, so if ur gonna fuck in da hood, u best be prepared to be takin from where you stood. ![]() |
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IP: 23A8 883C
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171966
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170569 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1894519 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1894827 Last edited by 50hater_killer : 01-14-05 at 07:14 PM. |
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Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
LOOK I ENJOYED THIS PIECE PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK
I try rule the hot block but some fool shot a glock// now got to duck my head or get struck by lead// but I dived fly just to survive a drive by// note I now tote a snub nose just to stay above those// that shoot rounds and pollute grounds// with shell casings |
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IP: 23A8 883C
I try rule the hot block but some fool shot a glock// now got to duck my head or get struck by lead//
I liked urs a lil that was the top two I enjoyed the others I think you could work on homes. |
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 23A8 883C
ok feedback only please. peace
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Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: 7358 77ED
definately can use some elevation.....this was an ok piece.....6/10 you can use elevation tho.....you'll g et better....i used to really suck so don't feel bad lol....check my first post on this site....it was wack lmao but keep elevatin
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