off da chains while u tied to da fence
u fakin mo than actors while yo flow worth 50 cents
i don't battle divas they get beat down like pinatas
if u don't undastand english then yo ass don't want nada
this is a challenge to anyone if they dare
u can't beat me i'm like freddy i know yo fears
i'm half puerto rican cookin niggaz wit goya
i don't think u ready fo drama i got sumthin fo ya
hotta than california is my lyrics n style
my flow smooth like cristyle i'm known to get wild
if u think dat u ready dis fo da wanna be thugz
don't be sayin u holdin slugz when u gettin walked on like rugz
my lyrikal tactics is like no other u ever seen
i leave a trail of defeated mc's wherever i been
girls addicted to da flow and da looks i'm like a drug
by da end of da night i'm a call yo girl a bug
cuz she all ova me drink da cum right out da mug
i guess she left ya cuz u suck like a slug

who's dat nigga spittin' flow like whoa
who's dat nigga lookin like he gone blow
who's dat nigga all dem ho's wanna know
who's dat nigga makin g'z on a low

it's JQ, he's an F.U.B. souljah rememba dat i told ya
be ready or it's ova

not much wordplay.. well good wordplay... Was a decent lil verse, very outplaqy concept.. vocab was aight.. lines didnt flow together too well.. not bad but needs work, elevate..

aight dawg at least u ain't said it wuz wack. i can live wit dat.
i'm lookin forward to seein some of ya work. holla

im wit crook on this one it aint wack but coulda been better 1/10 its barely a 6. evaluate ya game use vocab betta word play and use metaphors. one