truth scares me
how can it be
i know i'm blind yet i see
my spirit in chains
as my souls racked with pain
like a horse thats lame
just put me down
and if i rise again
then hear the sound
of the bass pound
just like a heart beat
would i kiss gods feet?
or would he tell me to rise
cos he despises me?
is it reality or a lack of symmetry i feel
would i share my last meal
if i knew what it was
or lie cheat and break laws
what are the new commandments
its outlandish
in the few moments of this ish
thousands will die their souls depart
families break apart
but i'm still hungry for money
and its strange see i find it funny
humorous and ironic not tricky
i have more than i'll ever know
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/new...&threadid=33419

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6213#post316213

is pretty good

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Soft focus

Whats the point of living?

The voices in my head Feat. Rule

Unlikely Alias

More Comming soon!

Not bad yo.
Poetic, should take it down to 'poetic scriptures' thread...
Keep workin...

respect.

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