yo im resurectin the next creed of emcees/
who blow enough to rock trees ta no leaves
flowin to be da ill supreme of all rhyme schemes/
from simple thoughts to playin in wide screen dreams
drill through the surface to realease da true ill skills/
droppin corpses of fake emcees in hilled land fills
leavin earth the roamin land of the hectic and majestic/
no room left for da fake and domestic
we havin all angles covered like a quadraseptic plan/
for the fake types nuttin but pain, scorn and disdain
for emcees dat wanna tatse der'd be ample to sample/
meltin skillz inta tracks like dey was burnt off a candle


>aint done<

Yo dawg, this flows nicely, rhymin is sick, pleny a multi's and that, you show good skills and I reckon it'll be better once u finish it.
Keep it up dawg!

Peace Out!!!!

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I didnt think much to this at all, lacked interest and eye catching lines, elevate....

nice wordplay ok vocab weak similies

revise, it has life