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The Gravaton
IP: 1819 6011
" yess , yess, The Gravaton, i said da Tha Gravaton//
-Its all gone; blasted, nuke bombs, combined neotrons // - Food and shelters give hope to children and moms// - men have to struggle, diggin beneath their own rubble// - burst tha bubble, ozone lair uncovered, deep slumber// - Mankind played to much and crashed bumper ta bumper// - Forget ya gay lovers, too late to put rubbers// - The Gravaton has begun....... -what have we become, a lifeless form of scum// -i'm trying to jump, but i aways get held down to subcumb// - The Gravaton..... - Goose bumps run underneath my skin and gums// - everytime i glimpse at this immense captivizing pressence/ -no specified defenition, caught in suspended animation// -only way out is to fight da force like luke and his light sword/ -pull back, from gettin slapped by a pimp in a cadillac// -this world now is pitch black from all tha radioactive attacks/ -showdown in little kyoto, noses growin like pinnochio's// -lying money hungry tycoons wash away ideas like typhoons/ -The gravaton is here to bring us doom// -Pulling every mass to its core, rich, middle, or poor// - everyone is gonna feel this rath like a bloody bath// -splashed, as you gasp for air; run like mcnair// -Through da force of a da gravoton's lair// -right now people dont care about their worst fear// -comin real and uncut, The gravaton onslaught// -force of destruction, unstopable juggernaut// -This is one battle da u.s cant stop// just wait when da poles drop// - - |
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: 1B0F 837F
ok for real... reply to other peoples stuff... i see like 7 of your drops on the front page right now... you might think it increases your chances of getting a reply but it doesnt... gotta reply to someone elses work... anyways this was like 10 times better than the last one of yours i peeped... work on your consistency... and keep the cream of the crop and post them... not every single rhyme you've ever written.... keep rhymin
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