Alright,
lets do 16 bars (one line=one bar)
I don't know how this voting system works, but It looks like whoever gets the most in 3 days? This cool with you respond...then will hit it up

i'm down post up

flow master screw must have lost a nut/
battlin me kid? you must be nuts/
fuck, I'm the master here/
fear, every word that i deliver/
u quiver, at the very sound of my voice/
choice i leave u w/ none but to run/
come, to this board you get wiped like ass/
I laugh, when I see your name/
lame, correct, you game? thats check/
teach u to respect, every word I speak/
you weak, you don't compare to my talent/
I spit the real, u spit the fallace/
my lyrics crush u like a mallot/
you ain't got no talent, you just actor/
I'm so active I have u stuck in a nuclear reactor/
your done bitch, turn to the next chapter/

u up

fool you obveuosly have got no game//
silly punches and kicks canstantly popin off real lame//
don't ever try to main tane my abnormal brian//
i'll deterate your flesh like acid rain//
you are straight up wacker than emcee hamer //
coming straight out of the suburbs of alabama//
going on tour with your mamah//
i'm sic and twisted like jeferry domer//
fuck around clown and your gay ass shall become a gonner//
i'll blow your ass up like the uni-bomber//
deflect your armor and endure to harm yah//

Hold on: FMC, aren't you the Christian Hip Hop Master?
Don't you think you've taken away from your credibility? You're sick and twisted like Dahmer? Bullshit. Are you a Christian like DMX?

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FMC:

I wasn't really feeling your verse. Weak punches (and kicks) that make people snicker rather than "OHH!".

i'll deterate your flesh like acid rain//

When the hell has acid rain really deteriarated someone's flesh? Ugh... You might as well say: "I'll cut you like a spoon"

Spelling words like "mane tane" "emcee hamer" domer, obveously, canstantly... It pisses me off. When you spell the words like that, and I'm reading it, it fucks me up when I try to pick up your flow because I run across brand new words!
deflect your armor? What???
Suburbs of Alabama? Where? Why not New Hampshire?...
Wack.
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Tact:

teach u to respect, every word I speak/
you weak, you don't compare to my talent/
I spit the real, u spit the fallace/
my lyrics crush u like a mallot/
you ain't got no talent, you just actor/

This was the best part of the battle. You have a weird flow... hard to pick up. Your links come end/front of bars like we're running a multi. I don't see that around here...
You didn't win this with flow... I would suggest thinking about your style. You had hits that actually meant something, besides wackness. I think the originality of your style compelled me to vote your way, rather than the sea of sameness FMC swims in.
Some glimmer.
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Keep working guys.

Unofficial Vote=Tact

vote goes to FMC... both verses were kinda weak, his actually had some punches and such...

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Yo, blunt. You need to poll vote. And if you're not registered, you should get so adorned. Despite my disagreement with your vote...

yo Shabaz, that structure I used I don't use all the time, looking at it, I don't even know why I did, the begeinning of each line can just be placed at the end of the previous one. hmmm......

F_M_C the battle was mos def weak...tact...you gotta clean ya act man....you need to work on ya structure n scheme bad...its like you didnt even attach F_M_C....fmc came nice wit the punches n kept me readin it...he had feelin through his verse n kept it alive...good finish and an endin

prps to both....

f_m_c gets my poll vote

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freelance

RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S

It should also be agreed that he didn't meet the line requirement, altoguh i don't mind, it mgiht affect ya voting. uppin

wasup you all just checking in to see the out come peace

uppin 4 da fuck of it