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first to 5 wins
3-0 rule is in effect
no crew vote, dickrydin votes, hatin and etc
20 bar max

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since we agreed to make this a quick battle, then have this done today.

20 bar max, but 1 bar=1line.....
i aint tryna write a book, seriously.......

my words are cosmetic surgery, my impatience leaves this patient faceless/ 1
My bullets hack into ya mainframe through, membrane penetration/ 2
I commit verbal epidermal burning wit no permit/ 3
My words fukk this kid up, like r kelly and jackson had a babysitting service/ 4
My curse words leave you 72 inches under the mud/ 5
leave you harder to find, than the cure for the common cold in magic johnson's blood/ 6
y'all peepin me like, "Maku why you fukkin wit this fake?/ 7
He suck harder than monica lewinsky tryna down a 10 gallon mcdonalds milk shake"/ 8
you words aren't weapons, you conceal and hold no tek/ 9
I'm crazy enough to impersonate R kelly, and show up at a jerry's kid convention, wit 6 condums and no check/ 10
killed you off, you tryna dance around death, but can't, from life you i deport/11
now you dance amongst a corpse, like a ballroom in a morge/12
My lyrical blades scramble ya flesh, creating a sick blend/13
I make you a rip van winkle sleepin eternally, amongst algae and fish fins/ 14

yo turn nigga

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this is why the fuck i hate goin first, mu'fuckas will duck you if you got a ill verse. c'mon man, hit it up!

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this cat and I agreed to set the battle off that day! and he ducked me! Matta fact as proof, i got a pm message of him telling ME to hurry up with the post of my verse.
k lowk ducked me-his pm message telling me to hurry up-proof

so i request to put dat win on my record...

i didnt duck you faggit...

you took too long to post, so i thought you werent gonna post...


and im not an i-net geek who's gonna sit on front of the comp. screen for hours waitin for you to post a verse...
and by the way you said you were gonna post 1rst no-matta what, so i makin sure you were gonna post....bitch...


you dont getta win unless you beat me...

^^^^lol
sorry kid, but you lost....



I’ll be ya DOCTER feedin you segements-of-virus MEDICINE
FACE-IT your gonna lose again, SMELL-bad like “dirty-MEXICANS”
Blow-up your “HOUSE” killing 30 HEADS in “ONE-RESEDENCE”
Make you cry? Don’t even MENTION-IT, fuked your GIRL
AND she’s the one who said your SENSETIVE……….
So don’t LIE, your retarded and cant-WRITE
You’re a PURE dumb-ass AIGHT! I know you logged on other-SITES
You remember 411 HYPE, YOU Clicked copy n’ paste then started TO-BITE
I “BURN” so many wack rappers, VOTERZ post “LITE”
Am I takin your PRIDE? You got SLAPPED while trying to FIGHT
Now I gotta BITCH-SLAP your crew for tryna DIK-RYDE
I’ll beat your face witta “PARKING-METER” so you “PAY THE TOLL”
Some peeps say “you are wut YOU EAT”, but your girl-I-STOLE
And I know It aint pussy you “eating”, its ya BOYZ “ASS-HOLE”
HALLOW-WEEN aint comin, we know your UGLY or is it just A-MASK
Don’t get MAD, but your “TIGHTY-WHITIES” the only thing that eva “FELT-YA-ASS”



blah......fukin keyed...fuk it.....your ova

uppin 4 votes....

it's a day past...i checked tha time

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you didn't take no damn 8 minutes faggit, you checked tha verse yesterday and took all day coming up with shit to try to top it. So stop frontin on how long it took. i could write some stuff in word, then post some bullshit ass message, wait, then copy paste my shit on there, and claim 8 minutes, so stop lying...that's why it took forever for you to reply.

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p.s.
you broad ass nigga, i typed mine quick, you took like a day and more, so don't step to me wit all that shit talk. Wut i look like spending a day on 10 lines. bitch please!

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bitch, if youd read wut i wrote, youd understand hoe...


i said i got tired of waitin for your ghetto ass so i bounced....
got drunk...
woke up the next morn...
checked this shit...
then murderd you, stop ya bitchen, fuck....we both got are verses in.....


uppin....seresiosly , there aint no reason for me to lie.....lol
-$-

K-Lowk:
Flow= 6
Multi's=6
Punches= 7
Overall = 6

Maku Jaiinliin:
Flow= 6
Multis=7
Punches=7
Overall=7

Vote= Maku Jaiinliin

Pz