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03-31-03, 04:59 PM
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1st freestyle on this msg board
IP: F886 A704
Yo yo check it my name is Mexicoz Shorty/
I'm no fuckin 40/ Yo im here representing the mexicans aka the minority/ Fuckin cops beat me with a stick say they have the authority/ I've been at this rap shit for a while/ some fuckers just start after they seen "8mile"/ Dont make me put u on trial/ I've been rhyming for bout a year/ You can call me the freestyle muskateer/ I'm here rapping wit my killa ass rhyme/ Thats it im done im all outa time/ I'll be back later so u can hear more yack yack yack/ I'm prolly at McDonalds eating me a "BIG MAC"/ Holla back ~Mexicoz Shorty |
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04-01-03, 11:21 AM
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IP: F886 A704
If any one wants to comment on it please do. I would like to know peoples oppinions. Also if anyone can give me advise on making my raps better let me know, I'll appreciate it.
Thanks ~~**Mexicoz Shorty**~~ |
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04-01-03, 11:23 AM
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IP: D79C 2834
dawg you have to reply to 2 open mics before you can drop anything.... go reply to 2 and i will give you feedback
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