this is somthing short i did for my mom, i was pretty dissapointed with it when i finished it but oh well, tell me how it could be better

Just an infant-seed, during instants of distant-dreams,
With intent-greed, counting minutes before syndicates-freeze,
An intimate-theme, of appreciation, you can reach to feel each-sensation,
With speech-amazin’, I try to meet tha elitist-station,
Like a dentist-patient, I’ve been through deep drilling, felt heat from steep-billing,
Defeats-willing, no retreat for indiscrete-killing,
I keep-spilling, guts and intestines, no rest to get tha-best-lines,
Intense-rhymes, that test and infest-enzymes,
Perfect-designs, to pour out REflections, and free physche-in-sections,
And be-blessin’, internally it’s me-stressin’,
DEflections, of any predicament, you know she’ll “stick” around and “spit-her-bit”,
Like “fix-a-dent”, and she’s quick to debit-tha-rent,
And emit-payment, keeping our house unharmed, never wrong she’s unmarred,
She’s gone-starved, worked long but is unscarred,
Unalarmed, by tha bottom-of-tha-rock, she keeps proddin’ and spottin’-another-job
Plottin’-further-stops, no dodgin’ she’s uppin’-for-a-spot,
Lost-ends-never-thought, a realist yet EXTRAordinary, you betcha she’ll take steps-to-be more-caring,
A gesture-of-sharing, if you met-her you must accept-her-as-unwavering,
So exceptional-it’s-scary, you’ll find no one better guaranteed, she’s rare too apparently,
Like an errant-seed, blossoming where there’s some disparity, and growing to become tha most fair at parenting, there’s no comparing, my mother is tha brightest star she’s glaring