Im resting these five fingers to death---
Inside the cornerstone of chains contained with blastocoel--
a breath
a victim resilient to stress and the vilidity to be set free--
I fly with figments that can transmit clarity to the psycho pupil being----
I am highest of them all---With out this central physical phenomenon your tears have less to cry apon-- DEATH
Misleading introverted high class dreaming jock---
Helpless indangerment of a human seeing strapped up to a wealthy modus vivendi rock----
I'd like to hear him through the gates inwhich my life was raptured---
From the light-- a constant feeling to far from healing and the ability to hold tight--
And tightly to a right mind set to the stages of this innocent childs past times i'd like to freely grasp his innocense to take a short breath---
But im resting these five fingers to a hapless misleading death--------------


These are some innovating words

uppinnnnnn for some words

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Tight vocab...Ill concept. Something no-one else has touched on.
keep bringin' it...

thanks for the words--alright uppin for some more

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tyte vocab... felt you on this... noth'n else to say....

keep dropp'n..................

uppinnnnnnn

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sexy as shit man..haha its ill

hmmm...


...this was strange....strangely intriguing that is....

...had a real darkly sting to it....pulls the reader into the piece...i like how you executed the beginning and the end so well...

...once or twice it was a bit sketchy...but overall, was a very good piece...different too...

..McCoys Crisps..(formely respecto)...

thanks for all the nice words uppin

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hmmm..interesting....i agree nice vocabs...tight flow...how u structured the piece made it more attractive...a little weak on the rhyme scheme but poems aint always to rhyme so its good...nice decriptive imagery words...all in all..madd shit!!..keeponit

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uppin all words are appreciated believe me!!

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yo vocab was flowin with ya structure..it was ill fa show--i could easily see your inmagery you had described