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Old 04-03-03, 09:30 PM   #1
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*With a broken life*

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I thought everyone was makin up their words as they wrote along?....guess ama freebust, be da one not to reherse~....Express how u feel-
With ya' own words~


A heart full of scars with a soul covered with holes
Doesn’t do much for my depression, except that it takes its tolls
After each and every heart break that tears me in two
Gluing my heart back together again until my love sinks through

A mind full of regrets that only helps to haunt my past
Wondering everyday if this day will be my last
To take me away from these thoughts of a dying tomorrow
Trying to cope with every regret that seems filled with sorrow

A soul which no longer exists for it has been taken apart
Piece by piece like the scars show with my broken heart
And every piece that has been broken off gets left behind
Lost in the memories of pain and depression that rages with time

Every step taken ahead, is a foot towards the end
For soon enough, life itself will be almost impossible to mend
And nothing of myself will soon be left, because they’ve taken it all
Leaving not even pity behind that could have saved me from the pics on the
wall

The lights have been turned off, happiness has slipped away
Into the nights darkness which only sheds light on my day
That makes me walk into a wall that shows me so much more emotion
Than I could ever have seen when I drank their sour love potion

As hope turns the other way, my love can’t help but croak
For every part of my body is useless, life is now broke…


Enufff...i'm a ghost...............PEace
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Old 04-03-03, 11:59 PM   #2
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nice poem....i was feelin it from beginnin to end...keep onit!!
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Old 04-04-03, 07:41 PM   #3
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THnx Shiz....atleast someone aint sleeepin up in RB shit...

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Old 04-04-03, 07:49 PM   #4
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i enjoyed the piece i think its nice to read a poem that rolls smoothly and is easy to comprehend--nice work keep it up--check out rapture light when you get the chance. thanks

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Old 04-04-03, 10:51 PM   #5
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THnx deacon ama peep yo piece in a minute


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