he used 2 call me babygurl i was his lady//
but he gon come at me callin me tellin me im shady//
now fo a minute i thought that i wuld be fine//
but i only find my self, thinkin an cryin//
cryin coz i kno his voice im missin//
cryin coz i remembered when we should have been kissin//
but sh*t i aint gon be sad for eva//
shuld I get my revenge n take it out him? NEVER!//
I’ll think of a good plan , u kno manderz, im clever//
Thinking if I should get his ho n f*ck up her up 2 tha core//
Thinking if I’ll i'll feel bad wen my keys scratchin her car door//
ima keep pullin it till theres a line from tha light to tha wheel//
have tha girl shaken , so p*ssed she gon wanna kill//
ill jus watch her frum a distance n laugh it off//
i hope she come at me 2, she wont do sh*t, she soft//
hell yea tha gurl can talk sh*t but wen it come to fightin//
*haha* she cant do it she'll pull my hair start scratchin n bitin//

HOLD UP! *haha* i gotta speak for a minute//
i jus relized wat im doin n this aint singin//
im talkin bout fightin this girl wen i kno she defensless//
thinkin bout my babi boi ~ this is senseless//
i shur in tha hell dont want him back//
no matta how much i care 4 him ~ fuck that//
he did me dirrty n i aint for it no more//
so he can b wit her ~ its ok ~ I heard she a whore//
she mus b nasty ~ I should start callin her “Nothin”//
Coz cant Nothin be compared to be ~ ima one of a kind ~ aint that sumthin?//
Its gon b kinda funny when u relize wat u lost//
Come to think of it, we’ll prollie talk again, but tis gon b my path ur gon cross//
But it wont b easy to get me back, lips glossed, hair tossed, for u, its gon cost//
Its gon take more than a *baby im sorry* its gonna take more than sum apologies//
Im gon have u beggin, on all fours, admittin u was wrong ~ Hands n knees//

a good story
nuthin too special tho
pretty basic but it looks u were
just tryin to get shit off ur chest
so thats cool

PS check out my "7 deadly rap"
thx

yeah this was nice to read,
it flowed all the way thru
-nice lil story

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D.L.W

thanks for tha *positive* input...mos ppl hate! but thanks ya guys!

this is nice but its kind of basic, you did of good job of making your point but when you do deep songs i think you need to paint a better picture of how you feel. up the imagery and it would be alot better.

lol I'm feelin thid most def fam...and MYK'z Sig is Gangsta.....lmao

sick made

Basic But was good and flowed Nicely

like i told some other people i aint one to say whats good or whats not, but i think 4 anyone who likes rap w/ a little bit of depth would like that shit, i know i did, and i think the rap game needs more girls too, i thout it was good, check out mine, " a soilders prayer",

soilder22

fa sho

that was basic wasnt really feelin it