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Old 04-09-03, 01:16 PM   #1
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Don't Do It

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Fought for independence, a way to stand out.
Be the only one in my light, quiet so I don’t have to shout.
Before you send me to my jury, listen to what I’m about.
I’ve battled to be my own man for years trying to carve this route.
I’ve trudged down roads, barefoot, head low.
Soul begging to escape, but I never let go.
Promised I’d find a better way, and have yet to do so.
Physically weeping, arms hang like a willow.
Put my head to my pillow and at night I lie awake.
Looking for any type of memorial on my journey, to hold as a keepsake.
Never act fake, distant myself from what you expect.
Never march behind another, or do what’s next.
Do what actions come to me, not what you might direct.
Connect on my level and see that things aren’t parallel.
Its like everyone I know rides on circles like a caracell.
And just like on the animals, everyone needs a ride.
I’d rather walk off it than ever step foot inside…

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Old 04-10-03, 02:34 AM   #2
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that was good as hell man...deep it made me think a little bit i like that....keep up


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Old 04-10-03, 10:49 AM   #3
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Ha, you doing your thing with this deep shit. Nice, I like it, it actually made me read it twice and I thought about more and more as I read it.


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Old 04-10-03, 03:50 PM   #4
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Old 04-10-03, 06:11 PM   #5
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Nice i enjoyed--you held your structure and mean was deep keep it comin

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Old 04-10-03, 06:12 PM   #6
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Old 04-10-03, 06:35 PM   #7
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Yur poem was filled with direct and constant flow--i understood every word of it rather than having confusing ish -(lyric)...but anyway....stay up and let your inner most thoughts run and supply us with mo good expression....
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