what this dude said^

first off put your raps in bars in order to make them easier to read. secondly, never type a verse in blocks coz it looks dumb like you're trying to shout of something. thirdly, verse should really be long than this, at least 16 bars for a decent read. fourthly, you should picka clear topic in order to be creative and push your rhymes in that direction. fifthly, you should avoid using played out lines and rhymes whenever possible.

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