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05-04-03, 01:45 PM | #1 | ||||||
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my dad (sux)
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my faggat -ass father,i hope he goes to hell,
but hes probaly goin to heaven,shit,o well i sometimes wonder why he came to this world, sometimes i wish he was wrapped up with bubble wrap and shipped straight to the dumb-shit world!! |
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05-04-03, 11:28 PM | #2 | ||||||
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Uhh that truthly Sucked
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05-04-03, 11:32 PM | #3 | ||||||
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wow...
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05-04-03, 11:58 PM | #4 | ||||
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i am unbelievably amazed.. anything can be considered poetry, its art... but this... this bordered the line of being complete shit...
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05-05-03, 12:24 AM | #5 | ||||||
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well...showed how felt but could have been better....
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05-05-03, 01:07 AM | #6 | |||||||
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Quote:
YEEEEEEEEEEP |
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05-05-03, 07:58 PM | #7 | ||||||
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..................... Riiiiiiight.
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05-06-03, 05:45 PM | #8 | ||||||
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uhm.. just keep working on it u'll get it right
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05-06-03, 08:33 PM | #9 | |||||||
Tampons are expensive
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nice start...i like how simple it is...but here's the catch...if u make ur piece more descriptive and longer then u would feel different that u did better...
this was nice....keep droppin!
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05-07-03, 12:36 AM | #10 | |||||||
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lol keep writing so i can keep laughing
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05-07-03, 04:37 AM | #11 | ||||||
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that shit sounds so funny. hehe oh wellz im not larfin at his situation but i dont think he was feelin it. heheh ahahahahah.
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