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You always criticize me like I'm no different from you
pointing out faults that damage my heart taring it apart, leaving marks and braking it into parts that turns my whole world around making my expression of happiness drown in a pool of poison, that covers my head the emotion speads through my body like cancer asking questions of concern, in return are evasive answers you don't know what its like in my shoes so you accuse my affection toward you and refuse to listen, to my pain walking on with happy thoughts in your brain leaving me in a cloud of rain, half-insane not knowing if life if worth living for another day so i walk away, and swallow the depression maybe one day you'll see and learn a lesson for your treatment towards me |
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HOOOOOOOOOOO nice one man. Really felt ya emotions on this. Mediocre vocab and an ok flow. Hope ta see ya do some more.
plz return the favor if ya can and comment on either "My theory on life" of "The life of a child"thx peace out |
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