sorry kid i was biz for a sec.......i'll key this quick...drop if your done
18 bars max
you know the rest of the rules

fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration
leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation
cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement
my thoughts adjacent ta kids who plot in basements
seeking ta destroy words that come from this closed “DOOR”
say no more I diminish “WOLF” in this siege of war
hung from slipknots expose this phoney with 9 shots
twin glocks spray hollows aimed at his wristwatch

that’s spitting deeply how’s wolf scriptions gonna beat me
i flow so sweetly its gonna take mad diction ta defeat me

dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme
in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime

your mike dreams get smoked like pipes from crack friends
scrap schemes of you growing old in the rap scene
unseen is your future like Christ in a room of blasphemy
why contest ta attack me when i undress your shit so naturally

wasnt this suppsosed ta be a quick battle???????????????????????????????????? fa real why the fuck do we need 100 characters ta post a fuckin 10 word reply
GAY i think

sorry i didnt even see this kid....

you just tryed to roar but it came like a squeek, that shit was weak from this newbie teckneek//
if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"//
I come discreet and eat this battle like meat, couldnt make you rhymes flow even with a phat beat//
I'm "straight forward" like the movement of my "rooks", my hooks get mad looks//
I'm "fryin" you like "fast food cooks". cuz your weak attacks come from nursery rhyme books//
Battling me is like "Shaq" on the "freethrow line", there is absolutely "no shot"//
White boy thinks he's gangsta cause once he smoked pot, but sees a black person and runs scared cuz he's more rasist then Trent Lott//
This muthafucka couldn't add "color" to this forum if he had a "paint can"//
He's more "socially retarded" then "Dustin Hoffman" in the movie "Rain Man"//
For your next battle try to savor some of my flavor it might make you come just a little bit braver//
Inspectin teck, i broke his neck so quick i shoulda had him sign a waiver//
I'm an assault maker, shook you quicker then a salt shaker//
buried this bitch faker in a "casket" like the "undertaker"//

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

wolf's ryme;

if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"//

it took me a min to fig. out the connection, but once i got it i was like ohh shit. I liked that line. Nice flow and punches

TeckNeek's ryme;

fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration
leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation
cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement

these were sum nice lyrics, a nice lil intro. I liked that shit but the shit i didn't like was . .

dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme
in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime

that line...ppl have been usin those words to ryme wit for a long time, i just thought it was too repetitive but good flow n lyrics none the less

The Break Down

Lyrics: Both
Flow: Teckneek
Metas: Wolf
Punches: Wolf

Winner/Vote = Wolf at the door

nice thanks kid. hit this up peoples. .................................................. ......................................

niice battle but if i could vote i would have ta give it ta Wolf at the door, better wordplay and punches, these were da lines i thought won it for em...

Battling me is like "Shaq" on the "freethrow line", there is absolutely "no shot"//
White boy thinks he's gangsta cause once he smoked pot, but sees a black person and runs scared cuz he's more rasist then Trent Lott//
This muthafucka couldn't add "color" to this forum if he had a "paint can"//
He's more "socially retarded" then "Dustin Hoffman" in the movie "Rain Man"//

peace

yeh i didnt like shit either thug ...after i posted it i was like that's WACK but whutevr its just a text battle im not gonna lose sleep over it ...haha

uppin. lets gets some votes in here kids. ... . . . . . .. .
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Lyrics= tie
flow=Teckneek
metas=Wolf
punches=Teckneek

vote- Teckneek


vote on mine:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46813
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46443
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46068
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46007

aight aight - we tied now - lets get some more votes up in this piece. me and teck will hit you back...................................

come on yall lets get some votes going up in here. .. .................................................. ..................................

uppin. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
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