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Old 05-20-03, 10:38 PM   #1
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Deepness uncovers Weakness/
Represent Holy figures like I was Jesus/
And every rhyme I write,my brain loses it all/
Spirituality like the last stand and first fall/
And then you hear old rhymes mechanically/
Newbies gettin conceited,fall back,from battlin me/
I'm here to make a name for myself,want something/
but all i do is get slept on like nothing/
And to be the best you must climb to the top/
like Darwin's theory,is you don't evolve,you will rot/
Your rhymes are all the same, recycled like earth day/
And then losing to battles, whose to blame?/
So whackness written on you like a road sign/
All drivers see it, and take it out in no time/
So to be the best you beat the best,thats rule 1/
Rule 2, is fuck wit me to meet a Gun/


(verse 2)
Fighting to the top like the way to go/
15 minutes, what matters is what you did, yo/
The achievements go as far as being put in books/
But in musi, a hot rhyme,is stored in a beats hook/
You all have to elevate at one time/
From being a played newbie to creating hot lines/
And you have to keep growin as you move/
And while growing, keeping all ways to stay smooth/
So stay elevatin and never try to stop/
Cuz you'll get stepped on, and no longer are you hot/
The greatest thing/
A gift from God to rap or sing/
like you perspire the more you move and drink/
So to rid you of the wastes that you bring in/
So to be the best you beat the best,thats rule 1/
Rule 2, is fuck wit me to meet a Gun/
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Old 05-20-03, 10:43 PM   #2
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One word describes this flow..................HOT
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Old 05-20-03, 10:43 PM   #3
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uppin!
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Old 05-20-03, 10:55 PM   #4
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whyy musst yaa sleep
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Old 05-20-03, 10:56 PM   #5
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This piece was tight man , ,content was Riding,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, keep spittin out fire bout tha truth........
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Old 05-20-03, 11:03 PM   #6
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uppin....
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Old 05-20-03, 11:19 PM   #7
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don't sleep
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Old 05-21-03, 12:00 AM   #8
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uppin for fam
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Old 05-21-03, 12:07 AM   #9
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decent drop, flow was on point

... it was good so i only got one tip of advice... try changin up your rhyme pattern, instead of just rhyming at the end, nah mean?...
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Old 05-21-03, 06:45 PM   #10
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Old 05-21-03, 07:57 PM   #11
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......damn homie.....u holdin this shit down dawg....fo sho.....this shit is fuckin ILL.........
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Old 05-21-03, 08:06 PM   #12
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Tight dawg tight
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Old 05-21-03, 09:13 PM   #13
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.....uppin 4 my boy.........
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Old 05-22-03, 02:25 PM   #14
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i liked it, shit was pretty tight. good spit fam. 1
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