the following hottness that you are about to experience was based on true events..lol

this piece aint all the way done yet but its a workin process right now so bear with me

This shit was originally made fo audio but im stuck wit a bullshit computer so just check it...

black text=Damani-DaGrinch
blue text=my concience


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All of us have our better half//thats me the concience //when we high and drunk cuz//we think thats nonsence //so i cut the voice out//hey what are you doing //cuz i gotta get my money now// screw it lets do it


I never thought this shit could ever happen in my life// high speed chase wit the wheel in my left and the blunt in my right// but ill start this tale off from the very begining// how it went from a normal day to crashing a car up in eppely// I started off skipping school gettin bent off the henney// tryin to get head from lori, precious or that bitch jenney// but it all took a turn for te worst when the homey came through//
talkin bout a convertible on 63rd and maple// we only 3 blocks away and the time is tickin// if we hurry the fuck up than we can than we can make this car missin// Well how you plan to do it?// they left the keys in the ignition// but right then is when my motha fuckin concience came in// talkin boutdont get yourself into this sticky situation// your lifes already fucked up dont make it worse// locked up for ten to life wishin for death and a hearse// just imagine your mother gettin that call on her cell// your son is in jail// damn son dont you think shell be hurt // thats when I cut the voice out and fuckin ignored it// the alcahol has my decision making distorted// well if you aint listening than take this shit as a warning

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Well why we wastin time lets go right now// thats when kevin cracked a smile and said i knew youd be down// now me and kevin on the creep// runnin down the block tryin to be indescrete// jumped in the car skirted out and smashed down the street// now we rollin deep stuntin in a new car// drunk and sommore cronned// not knowin where the fuck we are// after that we tried to hit the weed spot// but they was paranoid thinking white ass kevin was a cop// now its about eleven o'clock// was rollin da strip but took a right on dodge// and caught the sights of an undercover cop// he pulled on my left and threw the blue light on top// that just made me go faster than old dirty bastard after he stabbed her// than i heard a voice yell out WHAT A DISASTER!!!!// i tried to warn you about this but my opinion didnt matter//just pull over and turn yourself in before it gets worse// before the motha fuckin pigs' bullets disperse// i can see it in the newspaper tommorrow mornig// car thief saw the cop and he started stormin// within a matter of minutes the officers were swarmin// shots were fired through his windshield because he failed to yield// luitenant Davis stated that he had a weapon concieled// two bullets missed and one went through his head// the car spun and crashed, the passengers were instantly dead// do you really want that for you and your friends?// Whats it gonna take just to fuckin shut you up// imma hit this blunt and run// cuz its my life and i aint getin caught...

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to be continued........

THATS ILNESS NO DOUBT CONCEPT THE WAY YOU SPIT IT ON HERE EVEN THE TIMING TO CROSS THOUGHTS TIGHT

it was nice cant wait till its finished its just like a movie almost

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thanx for the props...

im uppin the shit out of this i wanna know what yall niggaz think

yo my verse done where do i send it

i guess just email me with that shit
damanidagrinch@hotmail.com

I SENT IT YOU SHOULD HAVE IT BY NOW

well thats what happens when you miss school lol nah serious tho this was tight id like to hear it in audio if ya can get a decent enough mic. i like story tellin hip hop but anyway check mine bent politicians (short but sweet) aight peace cuz

originality!!!! well, this has shades of eminem and dre's guilty conscience, but very nicely delivered, mostly good vocab and great use of conversational rap.

keep posting.

straight straight thanx for the props from my british catz.....