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Old 05-29-03, 04:52 PM   #1
JHustler
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From: Da Way
My First Spit Here

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yo, yo ,yo,

Dis is my first spit but im hotter than ever/
I lick bitches clit and i nut on dey sweater//
When i spit my flows come out clever/
I can kill any nigga in ever season and in any weather//
U my think my shit stupid but i don't really care/
As long as when i spit niggaz know that im here//
When i battle i'll make niggaz shake in fear/
Niggaz read my shit and wanna take my gear//
Nigga please im ruthless leavin niggaz toothless/
Im da nigga tellin kids what da truth is//
Dat im da hottest mc and niggaz dat battle me is foolish/
And i'm da tightest nigga and i'll always be da coolest//
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Last edited by JHustler : 05-29-03 at 05:00 PM.
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Old 05-29-03, 05:06 PM   #2
your_end
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s'aight, personally im not into tha basic 'gangsta' rhymes but s'all good... this was... yea... whatever it was...

peace


keep buildin'...
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Old 05-29-03, 05:52 PM   #3
Smokin Dro
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dats was ight
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Old 05-29-03, 10:53 PM   #4
Genetikz
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yea was iight for a 1stimer, u need to elivate alot n consentrait when ur writin alot of silly errors in speelin n grammer spoiled yo flow
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Old 05-29-03, 10:54 PM   #5
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Nice drop for a first timer . i was feelin it........Keep spittin and stay active
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