who in this world think they fuck with the odd/
ya'll dyslectic cause ya'll call me a dog i'm otherwise know as a god/
i penetrate the mind when i ventelate my rhymes/
and demostrate the divine lyrical power in my lines/
i'm both the hottest and coldest compare me to bengay/
or i could just put 23 shots to your chest and back like MJ/
i spit the hottest shit that any man could mannage/
and you can't OVER RUN my style until you actually UNDERSTAND IT/
damn it man don't make me have to kick you accross the planet/
i'll kick you while doin a hand stand while only one hand's planted/
and jump back with a second kick into your nose/
damage your throat beat you with you shoes and hang you with your clothes/
then unzip my pants and start pissin on your wounds/
and get even more vicious up under a full moon/
when i transform back into my original state/
a lyrical deamon who uses battles for bait/
and feast and rip the worst up to the fuckin realest/
shit i'll rip myself just to proove that i've ripped the illest/
i be the new hip-hop inVADER i don't need to be DARTH/
i'm surgical like, i can see if you got heart/
so fuck wit me if you dare i'll even give you the chance/
but your shit'll be over with once i give you a glance/
cause you can run, rap, flow, rhyme as fast as you can/
but you can't catch me cause i'm the gingerbread man/
i'll hit you up or fill you up when my gun's drawn/
leavin mad bodies all over your front lawn/
and i don't do my dirty work i'll let my blade face you/
and i'm a lazy motha fucka i'll let my bullets chase you/
call my my bluff check and see if i won't pull it/
just know that your chest is a good place to hide my bullets/

fuck it that's all i can come up with right now

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even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

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not bad....

worplay and punches werent bad.....

but anyone can write verses like this...

it'll be interesting to see how you do in a battle where the focus changes to punches and personals

keep writing man

and check out "The Life I Lead"
its my first open mic

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some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

i like how ya'll are just lookin and not postin any replies

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little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

damn ya'll steady sleepin on this shit reply man shit

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little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

It was fairly good yo.....acutually i liked it.....word play was good...along wit flow....lookin forward to your others.....check out mine....."dad this song is for you" or somethin i forgot the title...haha

aight now it's been an entire day since i've been here and still no replies wtf is goin on

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little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

This drop was Aight...........It was Simple....................But i liked tha way u put ur lines 2gether...........I liked it dawg.........Keep spittin

this shit is pissin my off all ya'll is sleepin

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little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

HOt........................................

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good lookin on the reply

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even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

ok ya'll still sleepin on this shit where ya'll at

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

tight..........good wordplay...........you got potential duke........good..keep spittin

oddly, what do you mean thats all you could think of?
haha.. fuckin lyin loser

here we go

i can just picture you sittin at your desk/
tryna come up with them rhymes, tryin your best/
how long did it take? 2 or 3 weeks?/
you know what you came up with? a great fuckin mess/
i aint scared of you, even if this shits off my head/
ill still freestyle and rap untill you lie dead/
vote for this loser..... and youre a fool/
he can rhyme, but hes missin the most important tool/
imagination, hit me with some personal shit/
instead of havin to work and work for your spits/
ill spit you to death/ till i got no breath/
sorry if youre hurt dude/ now ill rip out your chest/
you dunno me yet, im comin out of the mist see/
hit me back fagget/ come on bitch hit me!!!