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06-04-03, 04:16 PM | #1 | ||||||
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The Judgement
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i father your rhymes,and hyms-my name chimes to minds-
lyrical ancestor-beat the lessons out your young flow like a child neglector- it's been a long~ time~ cuming .... now that i have-im zipping up the insudtry treat it like trailor park trash-" hit it ,and pass"- see the whole world fear us,..... street's just~us(justice) ,clash with the miss classed- when i bust thus,... leaven you a fragment throwing stones with a jaw made of pain glass-held togeather by plain molass- colliding with me... words take form and conform to the effects of a car crash- we dont match up physically apperencly......we just clash-not in just what is adopted by earlobes-from mic tone to baratones and mano~tones- you got giving head to an artist you dickrodes microphone- i pack FULL HOUCE,ask your spouce i pack a full mouth- never see me fold-spit flames with a cold- watch me give bold sun tans and frost bites with arttic molds- to eskimos- at a HOUCE PARTY battle.... dAWG watch WHAT YOU SAY-i show the lighter side of you being gay-like before break up photos of kriss kross and KID AND PLAY- get the fuck off me!!!! this world infected by industry pussies thats whack on wax-so i came with a crew to train you all on the same track-to,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, take this dick !!!! with the bust motion-of a thrust locomotion- with NOS.....depos- while im ripping flames on the industry like the next holocaust- im here to stay so beware- your raps trailor home version on microphone got a chance.... and going no where- Last edited by WORD~PERFECT : 06-04-03 at 04:22 PM. |
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06-04-03, 04:21 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: C3CE 9765
pretty nice. i liked the wordplay. the bar structure was also on point. keep it comin
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06-04-03, 06:50 PM | #3 | |||||||
BANNED for biting
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IP: FF98 53B8
Nice ish man.......Ur wordplay was Nice
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06-04-03, 08:22 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 4B43 1085
this was a dope drop.........
we need to get our collab with Mad Man soon..... |
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06-04-03, 09:16 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 728B 8748
Tight Shyt Bro.. Loved This Piece... One Word 2 Describe It Dawg Ill... I Liked It All Except Ur Rhymin Scheme Could Be Improved..
pZ Playah... 1 Love.. $pitzophrenic |
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06-05-03, 08:17 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 1769 3B0F
mnad respects and schitz what can improve aboute it
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06-05-03, 09:47 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: D12B 3A56
ILLness dunz..
Your wordplay gets better with every drop... |
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06-05-03, 01:12 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 1769 3B0F
SO YOU LIKED
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