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A miss you so
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A girl is sittin holdin a photograph of her lover..tears in her eyes
Its amazin how days can quickly turn into years how that someone can help you draw back the tears make you feel fearless and so alive inside when they tell you how much they love you..eyes filled wit pride minutes seem like hours when your by theyre side pray for this moment to last untill the end of time but sadly fate comes and it took you away and you are no longer apart of my every day like i river i cry hurtfilled tears of unhappiness i wait for my hurt to to stop..but it is endless i never had the chance to say goodbye to you i wanted to tell you how much you meant to me boo but it was too late a seen you fall down on your knees blood spillin out of your chest as your hand reached for me I just froze not knowing whether to advance i retreated and watched you die from where i stand life was black....and my feelings were confused i couldnt understand how i was to go on... couldnt live witout you Anger began to boil and rose up thru ma body endothermic reactions of guilt rose up inside me my heart tore into pieces and scatterd all around and for the rest of my life my dreams shall be haunted with the sound of your fate of that gun from that young black males hand and the smirk on his face after killing a white man you never knew these people personnally... they just noticed a difference in skin brought up with parential advisery if you see them....then kill I wanted to run over but i was afraid of what might have happened if theyd laugh or shoot me ma mind was already battlin about whether you were dying or going to live if i could have helped you there my everything i would give for you o just take one more breathe and be here with me now but you died and left me although your here some how reprocusions of that night play oer and over in my hed i remember our good times at niht when i lay awake in mybed and as i turn my head to the side your heads next to mine your heart and soul is with me untill the end of time and whever life leads me i kno that you shall go and incase that you can hear me boo just kno i miss you so Rest In peace Last edited by PleDge : 06-04-03 at 08:02 PM. |
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awww..
this was heartfelt mami.. we all miss our loved ones that we have lost... this was filled with emotion.. really feelin this fam.. and as i turn my head to the side your heads next to mine your heart and soul is with me untill the end of time and whever life leads me i kno that you shall go and incase that you can hear me boo just kno i miss you so No Doubt!! Peace -1- |
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gret stuff really heart felt...peeps dont sleepm its a great read
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thanks fam..uppin
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Heartfelt Drop........I was really feelin this...so sweettttttttttttt......................Nice Piece.........U messed up on this tittle though...Its says A MISS YOU SO
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DAMNNNNNNNNNNN SADNESS IN THIS PIECE AND EMOTIONS WERE RUNNIN..............NICE DROP MA
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I Came Back Like Bustin Nuts On Spinal Chords Try Me Mofuckaz............ |
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lol @bash..thanks dawg ma mind was elsewhere when a done that lol......thanks for everyones opinions....uppin
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deep as fuck man ya know dope shit 2 i like this good work
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damn tight.............felt........reminds me of my girlfriend Cara.......... good piece....
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piece made me cry
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awww it was soo sad....*wipes tears*.....it was sweet sis...real nice
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yes it was
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Upppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin
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this was awesome i really felt this
the emotion my eyes literally got watered good shit stay up girl |
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thanks gurl
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