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Pain Of Plane...
IP: C1DA C961
"The Lonlieness, The Solitude, When The Voices In The Wind Start Callin' You"....
So Even After The Hurt After The Lies The Darkness Is In The Skies Remains The Thought Remains The Shy (S)o(A)lex(N)ever(D)ies He Weeps And Cries And Lets That Beast Of Lies Tear The Sides Of His Mind Leave It Dismembered Then Looks Into His Eyes Faces Comprise The Voices Deny The Love That Lurks The Inside The Love That Hurts Not Right And Even Makes Him Want To Die "God Why" Expected That Silent Reply The Vacation He's Hatin' The Summers He's Been Awaitin' Makes Him Sigh Lost His Patience And He Can't Comply With How He Doesn't Like The Vacation To Love's Other Side Feels Like The End Of God's Creation So If He Has To Die He Has To Make It Special For Conditions Without Her Knowing, He Goes Online, Purchases A Plane Ticket Spent All His Cash To Pay San Antonio one Last Terrible Visit And Swim The Skies And Escapes Life's Love Bar's And Prison .... "Southwest Airlines Flight 387 Is Now Boarding With Non-Stop Pa Thenssage To San Antonio Texas....Enjoy Your Flight..." Bored With Living So He Boarded The Death Walked To The Back He Sat, Passed Her By, She Didn't Notice, She Sat In 1st Class Where's The Love At? Through The Curtains He Could See Smiles, She Called Him From The Phone In The Back Of That Seat "Taking Off Now, About 3 Hours Sweetie" What?! Could It Be She Uses The Same Name For Him That She Does For Me? God... I Sat Patiently Hoping For What I Already Knew In The Dreams And I See. Fuck. How Could She Do This Knowing That She Loved The Victim, Was Like She Budged And Hit Him Is Heart Was What? Compared To Pennies In A Cup It Wasn't Too Much God Please... Take Away The Dreams Let Me Sleep With Out Having To See Disease Weakens My Knees Death Lets Depression Slip Some... So Then One Hour Into The Flight The Time Had Finally Come... The Sigh Of Love The Games She Had Tortured His Head With He Glanced "The Thoughts" Sitting in This Emergency Exit Ready To Exit Step Out Of The Door The Turned The Knob More Screamed Out "Whore!" She Looked Over And She Saw Him Still Talkin' Enjoyin Goodtimes Too Much To Even Stop Him.... His Last Words Echoed "The Grin The Smile That Stare Was Cute" And Alex Daskalos Skydived, Without A Fucking Parachute... "Ladies And Gentlemen On Behalf On Southwest Airlines We Give Our Deepest Apoligies For The Antics On This Flight...Welcome To San Antonio" Now He Was Surely Dead, His Body Thrashed Found In Pieces But He Hadn't Met Satan , And Sure As Fucking Hell Not Jesus All He Had Tried Was To Please He Needs Her In The Dark His Soul Had Traveled To The Deepest Part Of Her Heart The Start Of The End The Darkness Blends With The Light Look At her Face Sense The Dismay All His Purpose Was To Make Those Flares Stop 'N When She Saw Him Happiness' Bubbles Hurled Him Out The Top He Fell Out Her Mouth With A Cough. What In The Fuck?! He Ended Up In His...Swam Around The Inside Of His Mind... Amazed At The Suprises He'd Find . The Start Of The End Of Time He Couldn't Tell If He Had Loved Eva Or Not. He Prayed he Did... Because He Was Gone She Should Be Happy Whoever She's With So He Climbed Out, Finished Not Caring What Anything Else Was About... But It All Changed....When Ryan Coughed Him Up....In Someone Elses Mouth... Oops... Pain Of Plane....
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IP: B9D4 B44D
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Sand I was loving this Piece dawg.....This shit would be A Sickkkkk Audio......U stayed on topic , u never fell off......Man U tore this shit up dawg
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IP: ECED AE85
damn.
dude, you leave me fucking speachless..... but I'll point out that if you opened the door on a plane, most of the people in that section would've been sucked out too... and even Arnold couldn't have opened one in his Conan days.... but, thats just a technicality. the last verse was amazing. I wasn't aware souls could be passed around and such, but it was still wicked awesome sweetness, to use a few adjectives. so much for speechless, eh? Peace
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IP: C1DA C961
Sweet post, man. The story was captivating, the rhymes were tight...you kept me reading. Props.
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IP: B9BC 7A7C
this was awesome
i liked it full of emotion tons of it ILove you.... good writing |
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
Another legend i think
Very very nice Quote:
LoL Yes this was very creative and a wonderful piece Quote:
^^I really liked that bit Yeah really great piece to read *read's it aova 5 times* Blinding**** -one love- Really glad you put this back up. |
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 44B7 B6C4
daaaaamn sand, this shit was hotttttttt
i was feelin the whole topic and the whole verse shit... 1
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Sand
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IP: 9718 7C2A
up...legend votes?
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IP: B9D4 B44D
This is Legends material....4 sho......Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54967
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IP: 7EF9 FAD9
this shit was fuckin great. man....it was a wonderful topic, great lyrics and just overall wonderful. keep spittin man..........wow
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IP: C1DA C961
holy shit,that soem sicc shit kid,perfect topic u stayed on point ima go re read this and have to step mah game,good work.1
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IP: 3C26 DD51
defianately legend
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Sand
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IP: 9718 7C2A
werd....
kind weird eva thinks this is a legend....but thats really cool thank you.... ill get at that eventually bash. mad busy lately...
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