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04-20-03, 03:44 PM
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Beware of The Boys rmx
IP: 4577 CD9A
this bull shit was erased
Last edited by I.TWriter : 06-06-03 at 12:39 PM. |
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04-20-03, 06:34 PM
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one wink
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IP: D27D 0B18
what?
Put it in bar form. |
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04-20-03, 09:24 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yea, i cant understand it
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04-21-03, 10:06 AM
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IP: 5153 3B92
i kinda caught the flow a lil but yeah just put it in bar form, once im able to read it properly then i can help you out a lil!
and try not to use niggas so much , it's not cause im white it's just it fucks the rhyme up when u say it alot try and expand ur vocab , god knows i still got a lot of work to do wit mine cause i dont have the best choice of words either sometimes, but keep it up cuz ye'll get the hang of it! one |
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04-21-03, 10:52 AM
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IP: 4D18 261C
was aiight,but without the bar form i couldnt catch the flow,ecential is right,overuse of certain words killsa asong,just watch that in future,keep elevatin cat...
bismillah |
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04-21-03, 10:54 AM
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IP: C779 902B
uhhh.....
peep mine, tight beat and home life |
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06-06-03, 12:34 PM
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IP: BC99 309D
dam this is some old wack shit
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06-06-03, 12:38 PM
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IP: A2C2 E6C9
So dont upp it then!
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06-06-03, 04:19 PM
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BANNED for biting
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IP: D5F9 C4D2
U stold da Tittle from Jay z and Punaji MC.......
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06-08-03, 06:50 AM
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IP: BC99 309D
i didnt steal i just made my own version
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