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Keystyle Need Feedback
IP: C1DA C961
Niggas bout to get ripped like a paper shreda,
yall must be crazy if u think u can fight betta, u bout to get smacked wita bat like a double heada, dats fa any yall niggas dats tryna fuck wit my chedda// yall niggas get Xed out just like a old fiance', and left all by urself like destiny's child's beonce', wut kinda rapper u think u tryna portrey, it must be one dats about to die and decay// yall niggas can see Red reighnin down on ur parade, like da end of if "I Could to da world" by Bone Thugs N Harmonay, it's R.O.T.C. yall niggas cant see our brigade, cuz we startin to blow up like a mutha fuckin grenade// |
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BANNED For Being A Dick Too
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IP: 70A9 C9CB
Needs Improvement
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IP: C1DA C961
ight
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IP: 1501 77A0
ok here the dealllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lll
1) do not try and rap gangsta 2) try and spit about a top 3) do not talk about smacking killing people that much 4) spend more then 30 mins on a piece think about everyline u write and then it might be appreciated by people keep that in mind before ur next piece |
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IP: C1DA C961
ight Trill
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BANNED - Pink Slipped
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IP: 897F D286
or keep doin what ya doin and stay true to urself and perfect that style...
do what ya want.. needs improvement |
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IP: C1DA C961
Dats da best adice I got so far thanx
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IP: C1DA C961
THIS WAS COOL MAN WASNT NOTHIN SPECTACULAR YA KNOW... BUT COO YA KNOW
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BANNED for biting
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IP: B9D4 B44D
See I hate dem fuckin Newbies...They always want beef wit veterans , , And what makes it worse is dat tha Newbies are whack as Hell..........Red Wun man u aint in my league dawg....I cant believe u made a Diss Open mic To me......hahahahhaha...Everyone said it was whack
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